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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae @princesachtonicle22
Kate
Kate’s spell fizzled and dissolved with no effect for the third time. Why wouldn’t it work? It was supposed to transport her back to where she had been. True, she wasn’t good with transportation spells, but it should work. How far away was she?
I don’t think that’s gonna work, said Bloodsong cheerfully.…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic How To Write Christian Fantasy-Putting God In The Mix in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 1 month ago
Ooh, this is something I’ve been thinking about too.
The trick is that you have to balance between being clear when God acts, but not heavy handed.
You could try something like this:
God intervenes at the character’s darkest hour in their internal conflict. Set things up so that as the character is wrestling with themselves it…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Would you mind if I drop Kate into that group, since they seem to have finished their conversation?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Conlangs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
It’s cool how much culture you created for them as well as a language! The “ice juice” thing is really funny.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
COOL!! there’s already a ton of “adventure” RPs kinda
Yeah, I know. I’m in most of them, lol. This one was a bit different, because we actually had a sort of storyline instead of just letting the characters do whatever. I think that ended up being the death of it though. We restarted it over in Character Adventure, where we’re t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
So, this RP has a weird history. It started out pretty normal. The characters were trapped in a magic house and forced to have a party. Then it was decided to completely change it into an adventure RP. They had a lot of cool adventures, but eventually the RP started to die out. We decided to restart the adventure as a separate RP,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@everyone
I’m not going to throw her in quite yet, but I figure I’ll introduce her (for anyone unfamiliar) now.
Katílía Atmor

Katílía (kat-ee-lee-a) or Kate for short is an Eìvír as well. Her sword is called Bloodsong. She is not very trained with a sword or in any other style of combat, nor is does she have enough self-mastery to easily su…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom @rae @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @grcr
There was a mechanic in Resonancy that I had in it originally but kind of faded put without me realizing it.
It would make things more interesting, but I don’t think it will really fix my problems, because it probably wouldn’t really come into play in the first boo…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
Ariac levelled his sword threateningly at the stranger.
“I’m going to make this very simple for you,” he said. “You will promise not to hurt any of us here. …Or I can kill you right now.”
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Ariac is bluffing of course, since he can’t deliberately kill.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
And there’s also Bloodsong, who will show up with Kate in a bit.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Rina
The demon seemed to be losing…. Without. HER!
She clamped a portal around the wrist of the thing she had been fighting to hold it in place. The crystals immediately began to disintegrate as Rina pulled away.
She opened a portal under her fallen sword and caught it as it fell towards her.
She leapt through another portal towards the d…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Hello! I think I joined KP shortly after you left, so we haven’t met. I’m Jonas, @highscribeofaetherium’s brother if you know her.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
…and while they were dreaming, several characters mysteriously vanished… Definitely nothing to worry about!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
That was it.
Coins vanished from his pocket as a sword materialized in his hand, pointing at the newcomer.
“You should choose your next words…very…carefully.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Okay. Ellis is also in the town, but they’ve interacted a lot in the other RP already. I could also add Kate, but I think I’ll wait and let some other people throw their characters in.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Rina
“That is indeed most unfortunate for you, sir.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
No problem!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Rina
“I’m not in your way,” Rina pointed out. “It won’t take you any longer to get where you’re going with me in front of you. In fact it could take shorter.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
Okay, gotcha. The reply button at the top of each post just takes you to the text box at the bottom of the page, it doesn’t let you create nested replies. I assumed that would work when I joined too, but it doesn’t. Also note that the quote button next to the reply button does not work. If you want to quote someone, you can do this.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Rina
Rina teleported in front of him again and started walking backwards.
“You know, it’s generally polite to respond to people. Grunting doesn’t count. Where are you going?”
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