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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I’d assumed it was a boy, so… maybe? 😅🤣🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Whoa! I feel so bad for him. I don’t know how to describe it but the “seeing gold thing” is cool. 🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Dragons are not inherently evil. In fact, later there end up being a group of good dragons. Their motives are to bend the prophecy their way- I don’t know what the exact words will be, but it would be to where there could be multiple outcomes, one being the three chosen causing the dragons taking over (whether willingly or…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I couldn’t decide lol. I had a hard enough time deciding my own villain. 🤣🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Your characters seem really cool!
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Esther replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Question first: I’ve been toying around with a few, but
The Scarlet Freedom is a favorite or just The Freedom.Oooh, that sounds so cool!! 😀
Question second: My favorite OC is Mr. Daniels (Scarlet’s first mate and an old family friend)
But my favorite to write is Scarlet. I think because I subconsciously put my own per… -
Esther replied to the topic Psst! Avast there. in the forum Historical 3 years, 6 months ago
@she-is-pirate
Oooh. I’d love to hear about your WIP! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Welcome to the wonderful crew here on Kingdom Pen!! Now KP had an official pirate. We should be honored. 😁
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amateur writer!! My WIP is dystopian YA.
Now for some questions!!
1. What is the name of your ship that you sail on? (Cuz every p…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oooh, Madeline sounds so cool!
I love how she’s so short and she has some super tall guy to do her every wish. 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Ahh, Ami has a crush on Clint!! So cute!! ☺️
Ami
“Clint’s already meeting all the girls?” Another guy with dark hair and dark eyes said. “No fair. Gonna leave any for the rest of us to meet?” He put an arm around his friend’s shoulder.
He shoved his arm off. “Oh, knock it off. That’s no way to act around strangers.”
“A…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh, yes!!! The accent!!!🤣🤣
Yes, IKR?! 🤣🤣
I love that little story!! 😂
Reminds of a certain…Neverending Story perhaps??? 🤣🤣
What’s that? I’ve never heard of it, sry. 😅
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
No, you don’t have to but thanks for offering!!
Ok!
Hmm… I don’t know. You can make them their full size. That may be more interesting. 😏😁
Go for it!
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Felicity replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
These are the ranks:
Your first post, you are a Bumbling Henchman
20 posts: you become a Charismatic Rebel
50 posts: Wise Jester
100 posts: Loyal Sidekick
300 posts: Knight in Shining Armor
1000 posts: Eccentric Mentor
2000 posts: Chosen OneI looked up a pic of a corgi/healer mix and they are beautiful dogs! Ours is a German…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
1. Ah, I see. Thanks for the advice. I will certainly keep rum and loyalty in mind when dealing with pirates.
2. Well, both I guess. 😉 Do you have any pets in real life? My family has a dog and a flock of chickens, which includes four mostly friendly roosters.
3. Awesome!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I don’t mind at all! 🙂
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Felicity replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 6 months ago
Ok! Here it is! Feel free to critique it as needed. This was written very hurriedly because I was supposed to be making lunch…but I knew if I didn’t write it down I’d loose it. 🙂
To the Friend I Once Knew
Years have passed since we’ve been in touch
The friendship we shared has faded,
Drifting into memories I envy so much,
Our…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
(This is actually a point where our theologies may differ, I knew that would be the case, so my fault for bringing it up😅)
(No problem. Honestly I knew we’d differ here, (so maybe it’s my fault) especially in the question of whether or not Jesus is God, which is really important to me. I’d love to have a friendly discussion about…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
Aww, that’s so sad! 😢😢😢 I see how it can give Kylie her aha moment tho…but still.
Yeah. 😢
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Felicity replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
And Felicity, I would offer that in your book while your theme is awesome! Maybe make sure to provide that not All people are like Kylie’s friend. I do understand the theme you’re going for “Trusting God over man” but some people go to the extreme to the point of hating his creation and never opening their hearts again to the ones…
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