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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
And of course don’t feel bad if you don’t have time to read it, I get it, and glad you’re working on your WIP so much! And great work, 54 pages is a lot! I remember how happy I was when I hit 50 pages 🙂 Idk how many pages mine is since I’m using a platform called Reedsy and it doesn’t have pages (kind of weird, i know), but I have…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
no worries! I’m busy too, lol
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
From what I read so far, its really good! I will be checking it out from time to time (Dont worry, its not that I dont like it, I love it! But I am working on my WIP a bunch right now, 54 pages! 🙂 ) Thank you for sharing it!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Yay!!! Thank you!!! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
And btw…I tagged you where I posted my WIP if you’re interested 🙂
I’ll be patient…It’s that good!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 12 months ago
What’s your guys’ favorite Christian music artists? My favorites are Colton Dixon, Jeremy Camp, Tasha Layton, Dan Bremnes, and For King and Country!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Here’s my WIP if you’re interested! And don’t feel pressured to read it if you’re busy (or just don’t want to!, I understand that life gets complicated and busy!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Just read this! You did a great job with helping me connect with the characters. They feel so real!!!
I like your descriptions, but like others are saying, they were kind of long. I think it would help if you spread the descriptions out along the chapter instead of making them into one long paragraph. I’ve struggled with this as well, so…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Awwwww those two chapters! I like Jayla’s background…
But Yelena! Don’t say those things to Buckyyyyyy 😭
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Thanks! If you want to read more, I can tag you on the forum where I am posting the whole story and asking for critiques.
I feel so bad for Sef but I LOVE their relationship! It makes me so happy! 🙂
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
AHHHHHHH
That was SO good and adorable and amazingggggg
😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍
I love Alpine’s backstory!!
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Euodia replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
Wanda better be on that list, I’m still mad at freedom for not including her, *does a Wanda’s head tilt to freedom*
besides the twin should be together
OoOOOOo freedom got the head tilt!!!
Don’t worry, she is. 😉😂
I think my top 5 rn are…
1. Steve
2. Bucky
3. Wanda
4. Spiderman
5. Hawkeye
(Pietro hasn’t quite surpassed those…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Awww, I love it! You should definitively keep it, its so sweet!
I love it! Poor Sef, at least she has Lilitu. 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
like @lydia-s said: reinforcements have arrived!
Most romantic thing I’ve written (i mean it’s not that romantic but it still makes me happy every time I read it!)
“Sef!”
Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should ans…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Okay guys, here’s the most romantic thing I’ve written so far:
“Sef!”
Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should answer, she knew that hiding would only make him worse, but she was paralyzed with the cold hands of fea…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
I hope so!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
@grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Yeah i just tried and the green bar thingy loads but then it goes away and nothing happens. I’ve hit refresh multiple times but it doesn’t work 🙁
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
I tried a half-hour ago and it still doesn’t work :(((
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
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