introvert_girl

@introvert_girl

Yep this is the same job I was agonising over back then. God is great! 😀

@catwing

Thanks! 🤗

@introvert_girl

Oops sorry. I put away the file and closed the link for this project because I wanted to keep my focus on my WIP (which I’m thinking of getting some reviews for as well). But I’ll still like to know your thoughts this! The link should be working now. Thanks!

@mnvalentine

Hmm… yes maybe that will work. I was planning on having a more sweeping epic but maybe a tighter story might suit the premise better. Thanks!

@introvert_girl

Sure no problem.

@introvert_girl Can i just hop in? 🙂

I’ll tag @kaya-young (sorry if you’ve already been tagged)

Would your current WIPs MC rather fight one horse-sized duck, or fight ten duck size horses? (very deep philosophical question here 😛 )

And what on Taranar happened to this topic?!

Would your character rather take a train to a faraway place so he/she can enjoy the ride and look at the beautiful scenery, or just use a portal to get to the faraway place instantaneously to save all that time? (Assuming these are the only two options he/she has)

The Doctor would rather take the…[Read more]

@introvert_girl @daeus @ingridrd @sam-kowal

Great news! So even after that horrible job interview, they have contacted me and told me that they’re keen to take me on! 😀

It’ll still be a while before they can make an actual offer so I’m still praying about it and there are other positions that have also sparked my interest so I’ll still need G…[Read more]

More random questions:

@valtmy  @christianna-hellwig  Shall I add you two to my list of potential characters? It’s okay if you don’t want me to. 😉 If so, tell me a bit about yourselves 🙂

@itisastarrynight  @introvert_girl  @notawriter  What do you three want to look like?

@mariposa  Do you want your artsy pterodactyl in there, too? (Forg…[Read more]

The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story

Part Five: The Cart at the Edge of the Forest

“Wild troll-things?” Jenna wondered to herself as she soared on Kai’s back through the night.

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Several minutes later, she was at the edge of the Vivid Green forest, the largest wood on the island. The ankle-high grass shone white under the radiant, full moon (whic…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  @ariella-newheart  @notawriter  @itisastarrynight  @introvert_girl  @sage-g  @sarah-anson  @gabbyj  @artists

Today, I have several characters that need to be drawn!

• Lauryne: 11-13 years old. Long, straight, thick golden blond hair that’s usually tied up in a high ponytail, with a bit more hair framing her face. Blue eyes, freckle…

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Get ready, guys, this part contains one of my favorite scenes ever. Mwahahaaaaa…

The Gif-Hiders: An Easter Story

Part Four: The Young Man with the Extension Cord

“Two… thousand… GIFs?!”

“But of course! There are nearly six hundred Kapeefers on this island.”

Jenna stammered, “I-I can’t hide two thousand GIFs all over the island in o…[Read more]

@Jane-Maree Yeah, I think what I’m going to do is set a couple of days (or weeks, or even a month) aside to really figure out where I’m going with this thing, and clear up all the “figure it out when you get there” moments. As Elizabeth noted, I think I’ve been pressuring myself to be perfect and get this sorted right away. Now I all I want to do…[Read more]

My inbox is exploding. Which a good thing!

@sam-kowal Good point, I was reading the Hobbit at about that age too. As for dramatic, I think I can achieve that. *cough*not saying I have the tendency to be overdramatic. not saying that at all*cough* 😉

@notawriter Thank you muchly!

@ingridrd Why thank you!

@introvert_girl *scribbling down notes*…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking

Okay so I’ve never written a book, let alone a children’s one! (Even though I have a concept I’d love to be a children’s book.. but ehem)
So if it sounds like I’m spirting nonsense please disregard it and move on to the advice of other wiser kapeefers!

Firstly I like what Ingrid said about kids being visual. (Though i’m not…[Read more]

@introvert_girl

Hmm… What I can think of that might help you get yourself more into writing descriptions is to describe things in your POV character’s voice (unless you’re writing in omniscient) so that it shows character as well.

Avoid boring and cliche descriptions and make those sentences just as snappy and quotable as your dialogue. Use…[Read more]

@introvert_girl

Thank you so much. This means a lot to me.

@introvert_girl I like Han, but I actually disliked the Han + Leia combo too. And I never liked Leia *audience gasps again* she just rubbed me the wrong way sometimes

@dekreel

Sure. Here you go:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RPX7HA3UOkZD53L2Iow6n045t58yUrq8hLey3zT4npk/edit?usp=sharing

Since this story is abandoned, I won’t need a very specific and detailed edit or review. Just some general comments to improve my writing is all I’m looking for. 🙂

@introvert_girl

Yeah, I was going for a quick pace and…[Read more]

Wow. Guys, I am literally tearing up  X’)

@jane-maree

God doesn’t make mistakes.

So true. It’s easy to take for granted how we’re all masterpieces. Thank you for the reminder!

@that_writer_girl_99

As I was reading your reply, I started praying “Thy will be done.” I shouldn’t expect myself to be something. Who says God will make everything “r…[Read more]

@introvert_girl          I haven’t read all of the answers, so I’m sorry if this has already been said.  My advice is that you may want to add more of the characters emotions in there.  I used to just go right into the story without much emotion added in, but I know that girls at least, connect with characters nearly immediately whenever there’s…[Read more]