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@lydia-s

yeah, poor Daphne… alas, Klaiom’s true love must die. XD so sympathetic of me

yeah, well it’s all for the sake of the novel, they do not die in vain, at least XD

yes, you all were very helpful, thanks!

see you around! 🙂

@kathleenramm

okay, I gladly accept! Though it will make absolutely no sense! XD

“I was saving lives, Mythia, and I smacked her lightly with my reins, which I regretted, because she was jumpy for the entire next day!”

@kathleenramm Sure, sure. What did I write…uh…

Complete sentence, right.

“Oh? Then who will?”

Lowkey wish it was more interesting, haha…

@kathleenramm

Lovely dare!

“Easy for you to say! You’re not the one he’s chasing after.”

@iluvhim18

I hope I helped! You’re very welcome. 😀 <333

@elfwing

Aww! Poor Daphne… :'(

Well, thank you! Yes, it is pretty awesome. Especially when it affects so many people… 😛 Ah, yes, the dragon, the one who must always die. Lovely quote, btw. And I agree with every single one of your points. 😀

Very glad to have been able to put in my two cents! Hope it helped. I’ll see you around the forum! 😀

@seekjustice

Aww, I hope you can write one soon!

@iluvhim18

How fun!!! I wish you the best with it! 😀

@gracie-j

Agreed… Although a good Captain Wentworth ranks right up there with him in my opinion… 😉 (Yes, I am one of those crazy Persuasion fans. :P)

@abigail-m

Ah, yes, I do the same, mulling over scenes in my head over and over and over again. It’s lovely! 🙂

I hope you are…[Read more]

@elanor

*gasps* Wow, that is amazing! At the barn I go to, there used to be a half Clydesdale, half Paint named Clyde S. Dale (lol). He looked like a draft horse, had the feathers and everything, but he was no bigger than an average horse, perhaps even smaller! He was a bay as well, but you could see the paint patterns outlined on his coat. It…[Read more]

@ariel-f

Oh, fun! I think an element of mystery in any story makes it better. 😉

1) I’m not familiar with the first author, but I can add a big “YES!” to the last two! L.M.A. wrote one of my all-time favorite romances actually, Rose in Bloom. Have you read that one? L.M. Montgomery is also high on my list of favorites, Anne of the Island being…[Read more]

@joy-caroline Yeah, I think they’re similar enough. They’re both part of the Christian genre, which I think is broader.

@kathleenramm Ah, short stories are really effective! I have a lot started but I don’t know how short or long they’re gonna be just yet…

Recently, I guess has been more of scheduling things and getting my priorities straight. For the past year I’ve just been falling behind on my writing schedule of 5 pgs a day and ending up having to cram…[Read more]

@gracie-j

Phew! I am reassured, thank you! I feel more confident about the other ones I’m planning to write lol

I will say that if that kind of proposal appeared in my work it means someone else was writing for me and I will be hunting them down XD

Thanks! yes, I need to work on emotions in scenes to be sure, thanks for the feedback!

@gracie-j Glad I could help! Be warned, writing by hand has its disadvantages (namely, typing it all out again) but I do recommend it but as a distraction-free method!

@gracie-j Eyy, thanks for the tag! I’ll just answer your questions one by one.

1. Since I handwrite, my handwriting is so messy that I just ignore whatever I wrote beforehand. Also, writing with pen means I can’t edit or delete.

2. When I’m on computer I try not to do second drafts. Although, I will admit, sometimes I do need second drafts to…[Read more]

@gracie-j

okay so I am trying to figure out a really good way for my male MC to propose to the girl he loves… I wrote the proposal a while ago

*backstory;  Faeda (main character) is an orphan living on an island under attack, and there is literally a war about to explode at any second, so she’s seeing the troop about to leave (she doesn’t…[Read more]

@lydia-s

yes, she’s amazing with writing, truly gifted!

Yah, I wrote that part about a year ago, and I just went back and read it while listening to ‘The Eagles’ from the Return of the King soundtrack, and made myself cry… “why, Daphne? why did I kill youuuuu?” XD

haha no you make total sense! It sounds epic!!! betrayal of a family… oof its…[Read more]

@elfwing

Oh, that’s a good line… Kudos to your friend!

Ah, I see. Poor guy… Poor family… That sounds like a great scene though!

*jaw drops* WOW. That sounds awesome!!! XD Agghhhh, that’s such an intriguing story. In my book, it’s one of the MC’s father’s best friends (someone the MC looks up to) who betrays them, one of the MC’s sister’s…[Read more]