hanako

(also, let me know if you’d like a KP version of this chart. I made it for Unvale, but I can easily make it KP themed. Or custom if you’d like that.)

New charrie.

His name is Althea. Yes, it’s actually a girl’s name technically, but I chose it for the meaning and the sound of it. Plus, what are gendered names but a social construct that might not exist in a fantasy world? Anyways, I like the name Althea, and I think it fits him

@whalekeeper

I read that last sentence and I regret all my choices to emotionally torture this poor fellow

Honestly, Gabriel needs to work through those emotions. In his actual story (as far as I’m plotting it as of now) his emotions and people’s accusations leads to a bit of a negative story arc for him.

Gabriel

As Lucy’s arms wrapped around…[Read more]

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Gabriel

Gabriel pulled up his mask over his face, pulling the scarlet ribbon tight. The screeching had stopped, leaving behind a ringing in his ears and beyond that, silence. Gabriel couldn’t remember a time where he had heard no background noise in his life before. He couldn’t hear Lucy, all he could see was her…[Read more]

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@loopylin

By his planet’s measurement he’s only 19, which is something like 22-23 in Earth years, but I don’t know the exact conversion yet.

Acharis

Acharis stood frozen for a moment. Then he reached up and grasped the statue’s wrist, lowering her hand away from his mask.

“My mind. is not. fragile.” He said, punctuating the words and glaring…[Read more]

@loopylin

I’ll be praying.

sup dawgs

@keilah-h

Thanks! I will tag you when I post a new chapter.

You will find out more about the gods eventually, but it’s not much of a spoiler to say that, yes, they are humans. The term “god” is more than just a title, but they’re not thought of as gods to the extent that the Greek gods were irl, for example.

What does each color do in your…

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III. Venice is close actually. Florence is the actual inspiration. Next chapter should have a more complete description of things since we won’t be so high above everything.

4. I will try to catch that next time.

f. Lyre-in. Like the musical instrument but with an extra syllable.

VII. I’ll try, I’ll try!

@jonas

Here’s the things I thought of after my first readthrough. They may be slightly random.

1. I think the worldbuilding and magic system is introduced in understandable amounts (though I already knew some things about the magic system so I may not be the best judge)

b. It’s very engaging to read and if I picked this up in a bookstore and…[Read more]

@loopylin

I love how everyone who meets Ral has an instant dislike for him as soon as he opens his mouth XD I find it very amusing

Lol I’ll need to go read some of the other characters’ encounters.

Acharis

Acharis paused for a moment before following. His fingers closed around his sword. Just in case.

He didn’t speak. Asking questions wou…[Read more]

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Acharis

A voice rang out, sounding unnaturally loud against the surrounding quiet. Acharis slid his mask back down as the… thing? stepped out of the shrubbery, spouting some nonsense about humans being ugly.

Look who’s talking, Acharis thought as he studied it through eyes that were narrowed in suspicion. His hand shifted closer to t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m curious to know if this guy is going to be a problem for the other characters or if he’ll behave in a group setting.

He should be fine but we shall see. He’s not used to working with people.

@whalekeeper

FOUR? Oh my 🤣

He starts out against the protagonists for other reasons but as the story progresses he moves down the spectrum a bit towards the evil side. At this point he’s probably somewhere in between.

Caspian