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@grcr

Nice! Good job!

I really like prologues at all for some reason XD

@keilah-h

Thanks!!

One question: Where and in what time period is this supposed to be set? Because you refer to them as warriors and have them fight with old-style weapons, implying either a past or far future time period, but then refer to car accidents and computers (which I assume are computers like the one I’m typing to you on) like it’s set…

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Going back to the discussion of Twinborn (from several months ago, I know), I have recently decided that my favorite combination is Allomantic Electrum and Feruchemical Steel (Steel is just the best Feruchemical power.

First off, Electrum actually is more useful than I thought. So far, we’ve only seen it get used to negate Atium, but it a…[Read more]

Going back to the discussion of Twinborn (from several months ago, I know), I have recently decided that my favorite combination if Allomantic Electrum and Feruchemical Steel (Steel is just the best Feruchemical power.

So, Electrum actually is more useful than I thought. So far, we’ve only seen it get used to negate Atium, but it actually works a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Chase: Yeah. I-I now live on the edge of Shyton. Forest nearby.

@beth-torres

🙃

For some reason I thought Leviticus was way longer than it is. Lol.

LOL me too!! I was genuinely surprised when I saw only 27 chapters…

@anyone-idk @everyone

Howdy!! I wrote the prologue to my book and thought I’d share it!! 😆😁

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PROLOGUE

Swords, axes, large hammers, spears—hundreds of weapons lined the walls of the warrior training center, and photos of past warriors and their honor badges were framed and pinned. An air conditioner shook silently, blowing a cold b…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @esther-c @godlyfantasy12

Trying to decide if in the sleep after becoming a snake, would he dream or would it just be a dreamless deep sleep?

@whalekeeper

Sorry, I fell asleep at four and slept until midnight XD

Nar

“Um, I don’t have much of a set goal this year, besides the annual be the best at learning to heal. My lifelong goal right now is to find a forever cure for the Grath disease.” Nar glanced unknowingly at Jr, who’s face became serious and grave. “Jr has it, and…” She…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12

This is a section of chapter two i’m finally happy with, so now I’m posting it here so you all ca read it/critique it. enjoy!

“Nahim. Nahim!”

Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old friend’s hidden face. Nahim brushed Mandi…

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I think why Jr finds it amusing that Seb is trying to choke him is because Jr has strong neck muscles. A little fellow like Seb would have to be a lot stronger than he looks to choke Nahim.

Oh, and Hugo should expect more friendly gut punches at certain times, since that’s like just a thing jr does…he also likes to spar with his friends, but…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

That’s great XD Seb has to be one of my fav charries on this rp

Jr

“That’s lucky. I thought you were going to -“ Suddenly, jr felt weight around his neck. he almost lashed out, but noticed the little boy and decided to let him have his fun…Even if he was threatening to poke his eyes out with a writing utensil. Hugo pulled him o…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

IDK WHY IN THE GALAXIES MY BRAIN DID THIS, but I had to share it with you.

I got a picture of Seb seeing Jr punch Hugo, Nar looking relieved, but him going out and tackling Jr. Funny enough, instead of fighting back, Jr just allowed Seb to overpower him and whines “What? I get beat up by you and your little minion! No fair!” Then…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Jr

Jr’s hands fisted, his hand raised, but then fell. He sighed.

“It had to happen sooner or later. I suspected that was what Seb? Meant when he mentioned it. Little kids,” Jr chuckled, ” either straight-out honest, liar or joker.” Jr put his hand on Hugo’s shoulder, grabbing him like iron and shaking him a little. “Look at me. I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I don’t think you’re gonna expect Jr’s reaction

@whalekeeper

I haven’t translated the large amounts of recent Realn that has been spoken.

From when Nar was pleading with Jr to come stand by her

• Floraine means blessings. It’s the equivalent of a thank you.
• “Y le wend i ma agcom eten cum yi.” translates to “I will be happy if you would eat with me.” Rough, but I haven’t yet rounded out t…

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@whalekeeper

Nar

“Yes, Jr, listen to Seb. Tental?” 

Jr glanced at the pleading eyes of his sister. He sheathed his knife, and let go of Hugo’s throat..

“Fine, we’ll talk it out. Warrior to Warrior.” He grabbed Hugo by the shirt and pulled him out of the restaurant.

Nar sighed.

“We must wait here.” She looked after Hugo. “He’ll be fine. Y El…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Chase: y-yeah

It’s funny, having The Grath saves his life and hinders it at once. Jr can literally be frozen and be okay, like Steve Rogers or Bucky Barnes, but he can also be somewhat controlled by the disease. And at times it even keeps him from battle.