Jean Coul

@gracie-j

OOO, I am loving this topic!! 😉  (You are such a good writer btw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)  And you’re totally not the only romance guru out there–I adore sweet/well-written romances sooo much!!!!!!!!!

My favorite kiss scenes are the ones where you’ve been waiting for it for so long, and then when it happens, everything seems r…[Read more]

@gracie-j Ahem. Yes. I used to do the “He kissed her.” thing. Recently I’ve been trying to take some advice in, uh, describing it. Me, trying to describe what it feels like out of my own imagination:

I also tend to cut things short, so you’ll probably be ending up with like a paragraph long thing. But yea, I might give it another try next time I…[Read more]

@nanisnook

Sure! I can’t always promise I’ll be one, but I’d be grateful if you tagged me:)

@writerlexi1216

I think Anton would think that’s an excellent idea! He’s never had coffee before either, I believe he and Caira would get along really well:)
Are you kidding? That was just about the greatest/most hilarious excerpt I’ve ever read! There’s no way I could forget that one:) Haha, plus I’ve love those two’s dynamics, even in the…[Read more]

@gracie-j I mean… uh… I’ve actually been kissed before so I can provide advice on the whole feelings part.

@nanisnook @devastate-lasting I started out that way too. I’d used to be like “I want these two characters to kiss, but, uh, that’s really awkward, idk if I want to.” And then my heart would speed up literally thinking about it.
Annnn…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms #iwouldliketoseeyoutry

@nanisnook Yes, very red.

@gracie-j Mm…maybe, maybe. You’ve seen how I skimp on descriptions. I mean…I guess if I can imagine kiss scenes…that might…hmmm….

Ah, yes, GWTW was very very spicy. And also, mood about cheek-kissing.

1. I’m sure there are, haha. I wouldn’t call the first scene…[Read more]

@gracie-j

Awww, THANK YOU girl!!! <33333 I’m so happy you love them!!! They’re my favorite couple for certain 😉 (For a while, I gave Deek a “girlfriend” and thought they might be my favorite couple, but that didn’t happen XD) I haven’t written many romances in the past, so I’m very thankful that I have such wonderful advice to help me…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

Hey!  Can I finish the last one tomorrow?  So sorry for taking awhile–I’ve super, super busy!!!

But thank you so much for letting me read and critique your story!!  I wish you the best with editing, publishing, and your whole Project Gorgon journey!!!!  You’ve got talent, and I’m so glad you’re using it to glorify God!

Best,

Ella

@devastate-lasting I will convince you. #goals #authorsareevil #muahahahaha

@gracie-j Ah, shoot, I left for too long and my post disappeared…never mind.

Pfft, thanks for tagging me, even with what you know about me. I like to feel included.

Ah, before I read your scene I don’t think I’ve read a kiss scene for maybe 6 years? Not sure. And usually I either avert my eyes during movies or watch with some sort of wide-eyed…[Read more]

@abigail-m

Oh, that’s okay!!! I’m always super nervous to edit posts, because usually they vanish. I actually posted the above post twice because it disappeared, so I’m sorry if it duplicated!! 🙁 And that makes total sense:) Thank you!!:D Also, in response to your next post, THANK YOU!! 😀 😀 😀 😀 I’m going to try to work on them even more…[Read more]

@daisy-torres Ey, thanks for making this, girl! This’ll make me more motivated to write, I think!

@gracie-j You are seriously the pro to end all pros. Literally. Destroy everybody else in your path, including me. Do us all a mercy. XD

@gracie-j

YOU TAGGED THE RIGHT GIRL!!! YAY!!! *cough cough* All right, I’m sure it was inevitable that I would come here straightaway, but honestly? I’ve gotten to love writing romance so I can’t help it:) So I don’t have any specific questions, per say, though I was going to describe what I had outlined for my main pairing (Newton & Caira) and…[Read more]

@abigail-m

*grins* I’m glad Anton enjoyed the hot chocolate! Caira should visit Birch Woods sometime and let him try coffee–I’m sure the two of them would have an interesting chat over a cup of coffee XD Thank you!! I thought it fit both Deek and Newton’s characters to have that brotherly relationship, because neither of them ever had a brother…[Read more]

@abigail-

*grins* I’m glad Anton enjoyed the hot chocolate! Caira should visit Birch Woods sometime and let him try coffee–I’m sure the two of them would have an interesting chat over a cup of coffee XD Thank you!! I thought it fit both Deek and Newton’s characters to have that brotherly relationship, because neither of them ever had a brother a…[Read more]

@gracie-j YOU KNOW IT!!! XD the sweet cheese Thanks! I really *loved* writing it *ba-dum-sssss* XD What was your fave of the cheese moments?

@daisy-torres

Thank you! I’ll hopefully start writing between six and ten a.m. Central. But I’m not sure if anyone else writes at those times, if so, I’d be happy to join:)

@gracie-j Oh, seriously, you tagged the right girl. If any of you need advice, seriously, tag me. PLEASE.