@gwyndalf-the-wise
Active 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Has anyone else read the Dragons in Our Midst series? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
@hybridlore Oooh thanks for the tag!! XD
Yes, they’re amazing! Have you read just Dragons in Our Midst, or Oracles of Fire and Children of the Bard as well? Who’s your favorite character?
Yes I love this way too much… XD My favorite character is Ashley, btw, closely followed by Bonnie. 😉 -
PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
XD my brain must be tired because instead of putting Light’s name I put @Ezrian, like who tries to tag their own charrie 😂🤪
EZRIAN
Eyebrows raised, Ezrian blinked down at the youth who had just fallen face forward onto the floor and then promptly introduced himself. Though he did look foreign…maybe falling…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6
Jack
Just as Tyler spoke, the closet door swung open into the hall again.
Jack stepped out, still talking to Cody over his shoulder. “You can’t just slam the door in someone’s face. Come on out ‘an introduce yerself.”
He turned to the two out in the hall and gave them both a respectful nod. “Sorry for…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Seriously, though, your writing style is my favorite. I can’t wait to read something you publish.
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
This might just be me being a grammar perfectionist, and you haven’t done it in a while, but I have noticed a couple times you have written sentences like this:
“He stopped at the door, listened.”
I’ve seen actual published authors do this too, so it’s probably not a big deal, but when I see it, it distracts me from the story bec…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I love the scenes!!! 💗💗 I can really feel Tauren’s inner conflict in these two scenes, and I love that. Fabulous!!! 👏👏👏
Lol I’m sorry some how I never got back to you! Thank you so much! <33
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I really haven’t read enough of your writing to give a critique lol! All I know is your world is avatar-esk (Did the phoenix child idea stem from the avatar?) and is very unique. I could say that all the ideas from your world don’t seem super tied together, but I haven’t read enough to say that. Your writing style is very unique…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Dude, I love your writing style so much though! I’m trying to find something in your role plays, but I might be better at critiquing a snippet (sorry you’re busy with school! If you can’t find one, that’s alright.). I’ll keep looking, though.
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Loopy replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Thank you for your prayers! I’m praying about it too.
I get that. Getting away from it for a little bit can help.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Wow, 60k is great!
You are so welcome! 💗💗💗
Also on a random note, I prayed about wanting to have a good senior quote awhile back…
Guess what? I found the perfect one awhile ago!
“Part of the journey is the end.” – Tony Stark
🤣🤣😂
Is it not perfect?!!
Ok maybe I should watch endgame… I’ll get around to it maybe…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Man talk about communication issues 😭😭😭
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Thanks for being aware of that 💗💗 I know other people don’t understand what it feels like to be in the thick of it. Sometimes what looks like a step forwards from the outside doesn’t feel like one. And thank you for you’re encouragement!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Min, I am so glad God is helping you to put the pieces together. I know it’s still hard, confusing, and it still hurts, but God’s got you and your entire family through all of this…let God in and he will help you with whatever you need <3
I am too! Thank you for your encouragement <33
(I sooo meant to get back to you yeste…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yess!!! Victorian theme would be great!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I guess it’s sad and confusing 😉 <3
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@mineralizedwritings that’s good!
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