@godlyfantasy12
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Progress report!/Where I'm at in life in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Hey everyone!! I’ve been a bit AWOL lately, but that’s because some pretty amazing stuff has happened in the last few months and I’ve been pretty busy.
What’s so amazing, you ask? Well, first off, I moved out of my parent’s house about half a year ago now, which has really given me less time to write now that I’m working a full-time job and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@Freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 Any of you want to go next?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Crosshair
One of the soldiers drew his pistol. “Give us one good reason why we should tell you our names.”
The other had his hand on his holster, ready to draw.
Next to one of them, a young woman stood, evidently trying not to attract Crosshair’s attention. The way she hung close to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 All right then, here we go.
Crosshair
It was a little amusing, the way the fox thing was snarling at him like it wanted to bite his head off. Crosshair knew he could easily kick it into the wall before it even penetrated his armor.
“Hey!” one of the characters yelled, before also…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 what do you mean? He’s my character already.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Sorry y’all.
Mikkel
Grey tunics, mail shirts, long swords, helmets, and shields. The taller one wearing a matching grey cloak, the other’s crimson.
Who were these fellows? Two foreign soldiers, stepped out of the castle walls?
Where was he?
movement caught his attention. Another…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
It may be getting a bit wild… We’ll have to see.
As for not being on late at night, that’s okay. I shouldn’t be on late. 😉
ARE WE MEETING CROSSHAIR TOO? I’M A LITTLE CONFUSED. I went ahead and write it as if we were, but I’m not sure if we are, so I didn’t really pick up after…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Why don’t you go ahead? Not to sound weird and stalking, but Freedomwriter isn’t on.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Viktor
Did the Dorwinian women fight? Viktor frowned and glanced over at Alyona. She shook her head.
“I don’t know.” Zlatan interjected. “Zey could be some villians of zis place.”
They could be anybody.
“I’ve never heard of any lady guards.” Viktor shrugged.
A door creaked open not ten feet away from them. Viktor s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka
Mikkel
Weapon ready, blood hot, heart solid stone. A small weathered door stood at the end of this passage. Mikkel pressed himself to the wall as close to the door as he dared. He felt Riker and Ezra beside him.
Voices…young voices.
“Are there any female guards that you know of?” a girl. “If not…p…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Viktor
More soldiers?
They were like a lost sheep surrounded by hunting jackals.
Or walls of flames.
And dogs.
Viktor shook his head.
He didn’t know what they meant by Nyx hearing anything, but apparently the tiny fox was incredibly intelligent.
“Do you know what they were singing?” Viktor rubbed the back of his…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
This is getting awesome!
The Brothers
“Singing.” Vulkasin grinned.
Nyx came back, placing his tiny self between Lyn and the building.
He turned to the Mynclaises. “Is it usual for Ocran’s gaurds to sing?”
Alyona shook her head.
He turned to the fox. “Could you tell the type of song?”
Ara…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Ah, yes. That would make sense.
Poor Nyx! XD
So… Would he and Alyona get stuck together? Or Alyona and Lynn?
Awwwww. ❤️ That would be an honor. 😉
Oh, the dear little fuzz ball.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Absolutely! I’d actually love to separate the siblings again, since I’m playing with it being a huge plot point in my book.
So… Maybe Alyona gets caught?
And Viktor is with the group still?
And they get to see another part of him. XD
This would also add pressure to find Ocran before…..?
But I don’t know. What do y’all think?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
That sounds good to me!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
By the way, the Vulk brothers speak with a rough Russian accent.
The brothers
“Let’s review what we know.”
Vulkasin’s groan was cut short by a look. His brother was in high order all right. More plans.
“Ze Lord of zis place ran into Lyn, and isn’t too happy about it. Ve need to be careful…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Sounds good!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
I think we should meet up with the others. If the numbers are too much at the moment, Alyona and Viktor can get separated from the group and rejoin before the Ocran Battle.
But I do want them all to meet @freedomwriter76 ‘s and @koshka ‘s characters.
This is fantabulous!
By the way, the far building Viktor keeps referring to…[Read more]
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