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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic What is a good character ☠️ Death ☠️ in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
God will help and lead me
Agree. This is the best philosophy.
I will say that since you already are planning a sequel series I would use foreshadowing in the first one. I have found this helps the ones I have seen be good. This is true with all series in my opinion.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What is a good character ☠️ Death ☠️ in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
😊 It sounds good to me, I love your whole chrystal thing and I’m curious what happens with Corvina!!
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic What is a good character ☠️ Death ☠️ in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
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Oh no. A sequel series that revives a character and builds a plot all around them. 🙂 (I am not sure if this is you (mostly just an assumption). I have seen this a bit (and seen it done badly). No lie I could go on and on about sequel series (maybe a thread on this could be good) (my biggest gripe is that they sometimes fail…[Read more]
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic What is a good character ☠️ Death ☠️ in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
I would like to say that is exactly the reason you should leave the character dead (read some interviews with G.R.R. Martin).
But if you don’t want to kill her then you should make sure that her return makes sense. The best suggestions I have without knowing the exact situation are to use heavy foreshadowing and to also…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
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Hello all. I’m posting another…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic What is a good character ☠️ Death ☠️ in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
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YEah, I like it when my favorite come back to life, but usually my favorites stay dead and the obnoxious character I didn’t like lives. *sadness*@otherworldlyhistorian
1. They’re just one of millions of casualties. Their death has no purpose. The author just had it there for feels.4. I’m not sure I understand your…[Read more]
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic What is a good character ☠️ Death ☠️ in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
I have to disagree with you on bringing back characters. I feel like unless it is significantly foreshadowed or makes complete logical sense (ie. a character has an object that can bring someone back from the dead which is revealed before the character it is used on has died) (chekovs gun) it is better for them to stay dead. I…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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If y’all want, I can always have Teilo and Evander and the thing that is attacking them show up. Totally up to you guys though!@esther-c
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Ok! I have written a brief history of the Aletheia, the country in my WIP!
Be warned: It is unedited. XD
(It may sound very similar to the history of a country that most of us are familiar with…)
Aletheia was founded on the B…
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin Yeah, that sounds good!! Aww, sweet Carmen and Carter. <3<3 And yeah, that works perfectly @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings
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Joshua’s eyebrows furrowed together, and his eyes were like deep pools. He was thinking. And something in his eyes told me that I wasn’t the only one who had b…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic "Fixing" the Star Wars sequel trilogy??? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Don’t worry, that ship is VERY intact (He survives!). But I’ll get to that in a couple seconds if my computer doesn’t wig out again…..
@folith-feolin ANDOR YESSSS. Not sure if this’ll interest you, but these five books I’m currently talking about are the final third of a 15-book fanfic (told you it was lengthy), which spans from…[Read more]
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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@anyoneelsethatseesthisIt has fixed.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Aww November has dimples? I forgot! 😂
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I actually find that writing out of order helps my writing lol. I got to start off my book already familiar with my charries and how they interact, because I’d already been writing them for awhile.
Cool!! That’s really interesting!
I promise I won’t kill him!!!
XDXD
See, it was a fleeting thought. Then…[Read more]
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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@anyoneelsethatseesthisHey. Is it just me or is KP down again?
Anyway…
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Your charries seem interesting. Specifically Joclyn. I loked the mood boards.@freedomwriter76
Thanks for explaining Adolphus. He looks like an intriguing anti-villain. I a…[Read more] -
MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
AHHHHHH!! Poor Adolphus! 😭😭
That is sooo sad!!!! But it looks really great nonetheless.
I love Grimm’s! Looks amazing, and his color scheme is really cool! XD
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Those moodboards are gorgeous!
*gasp* You gave me an idea! I’m gonna make a moodboard for my villain/antagonist this weekend!! *smiles mischeivously*
This one is Aloth’s. (From the Refined Duology)

Cool!! Is Adolphus the brothers’ (Leo, Ruben, etc.) father?
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Gwyndalf the Wise posted an update 3 years, 8 months ago
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Does recent topics function normally for y’all? On my computer it keeps saying something to the effect of “This is not the post you’re looking for…” - Load More

Yeah. Sometimes that happens. It’s happening for me right now. I think it normally fixes itself either later in the day or the next day.
Oh good. XD I was worried that I’d broken a guideline or something…
Yeeeahh, the website likes to get weird sometimes
Ah, okay.
Sometimes. I’m not sure if it’s a server glitch or if it’s something on our side.
Huh. Maybe both.