GodlyFantasy12

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(Oops, I intended to respond earlier, but…)

Ara and November are great together, from what I’ve read of the first draft scenes you posted. (November’s father makes my blood boil, but that’s beside the point)

I don’t exactly have any romance plots in my book yet, but I do know which characters get married (if that makes sense).…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @felicity @sarafini @

Wow!!! Thank you all so much for the tips and ideas!!! As soon as y’all started sharing ideas, my brain was just like gushing with more ideas about other parts of the story!! So I have a TON of stuff to work with now 😃! Thank you all so much 😊!!

@sarafini

Ooh that sounds interesting! When you s…[Read more]

@wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @esther-c @any-one-else-i-might-have-forgotten-I’m-so-scatter-brained-X-D-

Aww! I love all of y’all’s charries!! 😊

Okay, so all of my charries Greatest Love so far are their siblings/family. But their fears are an assortment of different things.

Matthew

Greatest Love:

His sister, Lyla.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I mean in the second book one readers might think there’s one but it’s just…yea whatever

Ah yes, faking readers out is one of the best feelings, especially when they fall for it hard 🤣

@godlyfantasy12

yeah, I really like Grimm for some reason! Like idk why! He sounds so interesting, and his name seems very fitting.

Nyx having to talk to people he doesn’t trust out of need is a really interesting thing…

Aww he’s a sweetheart inside? I love that 😀!!

haha yes… pet peeve… lol I get it. And if I were an intelligent animal I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh I love that plot for your characters! Sounds awesome!

That actually is so similar to what I’m doing, but different too.

I love Nyx only being heard by those he trusts… does he trust Grimm? and I can’t imagine the frustration of trying to tell people your fox brother talks (or are people familiar with the species?) when only…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Totally! I’m not a big reader of romance, but I’m all for wholesome relationships between characters who actually would sacrifice themselves for each other.. like, especially when they’re already married 😂 I know most people love the teenager crush drama, but I honestly prefer the ‘boring’ couples. They’re so much more sweet. Is…[Read more]

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Honestly it’s sorta like what happens with Nyx, Grimm and Jocelyn in my book series, except you have a bit of leeway due to it being in comic form 😊

Oh yeah! I know a little bit about them… Nyx is a fox… right? And I might be getting this wrong, Jocelyn is his sister? And she and Grimm are together, right? Mind if I ask how a f…[Read more]

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Now as for the loud Vs quiet…I would advice steering clear of Layson changing and becoming totally quiet to please Kaine or changing himself completely, but he can adjust a few things maybe to be just a bit calmer around the boy until he becomes more familiar with him, but Kaine will also need to grow too as the time goes on.…

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@godlyfantasy12

Not exactly sure what you mean by pov characters…

It’s eventually going to be comic style, so there isn’t much of a pov. Anybody’s thoughts can be shown too.

Layson is 19, I think Everly is 22. Layson is really mature for his age.

Oh I’m not sure if I want them to get married in the book, I think it might be a ending thing…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @anyone else who wants to help!

Oh, great advice!

So here’s my problem:

Kaine, Everly’s younger brother has been caring for here pretty intensely since she got injured about 6 months prior. Exuasting himself so that she can be comfortable has basically become a way of life for him. He feels it’s the least he can do, because she…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Those points are really good!

In one of my WIP’s I have romance between a non-Christian girl and a Christian guy that ends up shattering because the girl doesn’t understand why he is so passionate about Jesus. She asks, “Can’t you just keep your religion in the background?” And he has to tell her, “No, that’s not how it works.”

@godlyfantasy12

Totally!

@esther-c

See that?! You’ve got this girl!

@godlyfantasy12

The way I see it, people won’t notice if language isn’t there, but they will notice if it is.

Good point. Very good point.

Hey I’m in if you start a Romance Subplots topic!

@lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @loopylin

I’m not sure who else is on here 😅

Maybe I could join in! I have an interesting villain I’m trying to develop more that I’d like to throw in, along with Ami and Ev, of course. Does that work?

Oh, and maybe Lukas too… I may just have too…

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone

Okay! Well, we’re kinda just wandering around the castle. Any of you have a villain you can bring in? Or a cool room to find?

@godlyfantasy12 you can bring in Aramis, Edrich, and/or Lilith, if you like.

Lyla and Matthew

“Crosshair, no need to be so harsh,” A young woman said, walking out f…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

How about we make a forum topic for romance subplots? If y’all want to?

Yeah! That sounds good.

 

 

As for Paxton….

IKR?! Quite honestly idk. I just have a thing for adorable little boys and had to have one in my series. Plus it does make the things he go thru…a lot worse…but, also makes the happier parts, the hope he keeps a…

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@godlyfantasy12

lol no I have not met him! Feel free to share about him if you like!

I actually asked you about your experience in charrie romances in another forum… I believe you may have missed it XD

But anyways I would love some advice if you have any XD I have no idea what I’m doing with it

@wilder-w

Girl… I love Shawn!!!!

@mineralizedwritings

Your charries are so cool!!! (I still need to read your WIP. I really do want to, but I can never find time to sit down and do it. 😅)

@godlyfantasy12

AHHH THANK U FOR DOING LUKAS! *hugs baby tight* THE BABY!!! I love him XD

YES!!! Lukas is totally one of my favorites!!!

@felicity @godlyfantasy12

That fact that I’m already building a fan base for my charries is super encouraging!! 😆😁