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@smiley

Ooooooo! I like it! Hannah sounds wonderful for Pietro too!!!

I’m excited to hear more!

@freedomwriter76

heyyy! so as far as your question about sam sacrificing himself… i think I would say something similar to Min, in that if Thor or Captain Marvel are there and could potentially survive, why make Sam do it? It might leave a reader frustrated over a pointless death.

but also agree that Bucky would so sad!! he’s already gone…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, it’s not working for me either.

@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

XD my brain must be tired because instead of putting Light’s name I put @Ezrian, like who tries to tag their own charrie 😂🤪

EZRIAN

Eyebrows raised, Ezrian blinked down at the youth who had just fallen face forward onto the floor and then promptly introduced himself. Though he did look foreign…maybe falling…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I have read the first two! Haven’t been able to get the next ones, though. BUT I do know that @kyronthearcanin likes them!

@trailblazer

I really like it so far! I don’t have much feedback, but I would love to read whatever comes next!

@freedomwriter76

I love the scenes!!! 💗💗 I can really feel Tauren’s inner conflict in these two scenes, and I love that. Fabulous!!! 👏👏👏

Lol I’m sorry some how I never got back to you! Thank you so much!  <33

@whalekeeper

I really haven’t read enough of your writing to give a critique lol! All I know is your world is avatar-esk  (Did the phoenix child idea stem from the avatar?) and is very unique. I could say that all the ideas from your world don’t seem super tied together, but I haven’t read enough to say that. Your writing style is very unique…[Read more]

@loopylin

XD Isn’t it so funny when you realize your own habits? And that’s not a bad one either, because you obviously write them really well.

@mineralizedwritings

Ofc <3

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @calyhuge @keilah-h @whoeverwantstogivemewhatfor

I was wondering if you guys might want to help me out 😛

I don’t get very many critiques. Not because I’m perfect, just because that kind of stuff hasn’t been dished out to me lately. I would love to have some more to work with, because altho…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

XD Yep, she’s pretty fun to write.

@smiley

It’s a good one!

@whalekeeper

Agreed! <3

@mineralizedwritings

I LOVE how Lesli just embarrasses Tauren with her genuineness XD She can be bold when she wants to. Such a mood, on both sides.

@mineralizedwritings

Of course <3 You should not try to pretend those feelings aren’t there. It will never be fixed all at once. There’s a time to be positive, and a time to recognize those feelings – a healthy dose of both at once.

@smiley

Thank you for your prayers! I’m praying about it too.

I get that. Getting away from it for a little bit can help.

@freedomwriter76

Wow, 60k is great!

You are so welcome! 💗💗💗

Also on a random note, I prayed about wanting to have a good senior quote awhile back…

Guess what? I found the perfect one awhile ago!

“Part of the journey is the end.” – Tony Stark

🤣🤣😂

Is it not perfect?!!

Ok maybe I should watch endgame… I’ll get around to it maybe…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Man talk about communication issues 😭😭😭

@whalekeeper

Thanks for being aware of that 💗💗 I know other people don’t understand what it feels like to be in the thick of it. Sometimes what looks like a step forwards from the outside doesn’t feel like one. And thank you for you’re encouragement!

@freedomwriter76

Min, I am so glad God is helping you to put the pieces together. I know it’s still hard, confusing, and it still hurts, but God’s got you and your entire family through all of this…let God in and he will help you with whatever you need <3

I am too! Thank you for your encouragement <33

(I sooo meant to get back to you yeste…

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