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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
I don’t think it’s too summary-y, lol. It fits the style so far very well! I would’ve maybe liked to see the scene with Libbie hanging out with Sara, Lillian, and Etta in a non-summary kind of style, but if they’re not major characters, I think this works best. Great job so far, I’m really enjoying it! 😁
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6
Thank you guys <33
Oh that looks so cool! So this wip involves like the parents of the bois… riker or leon? Lol I forgot, but it does involve some character I would know, right? Also I love the quote about falling… it encapsulates such a mood. And the middle bottom picture, so…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Looks good! 😁 aw, poor Albert!
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Light replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
That was so good girl!!! So sad and sweet at the same time ❤❤❤
Poor little Sebastian…😭🥺✨❤
And Hugo 😭🥺✨❤
Your characters are now officially in my mental ‘favorite character list’ ❤
And girl I absolutely love your writing style, it is amazing…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
ARGHHHHHH! That is like one of my favorite and least favorite movies of all time!!! 😭😭😭😍😍😍 It’s SO sad but good and my poor heart can’t take it!
I KNOWWW!!!! It’s so conflictingly bittersweettttt 😭😭😍😍 After we finished it I just laid on my bed in shock, and my 11 year old brother comforted me ❤❤
I’m trying to get my family to watch…
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@FREEDOMWRITER76
OH MY GOODNESS FREEDOM!!!!!!! I AM SOOOOOOOO EXCITED FOR YOUUUUUU!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
🎉🎉🎉🎉🥳🥳🥳🥳❤❤❤❤❤🥰🥰🥰🥰
Also…I just told my little brother that you’ve finished your book (he’s been a fan ever since I let him read some of your scenes that you post)…he said to tell you that he wants to read it 🥰🥰
Also @mineral…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
LOL I get it. I’m a little insecure, and I have gone overboard sharing emotions here on kp before, around when I first joined. I mean I straight up ranted to somebody I didn’t know that well… I now know everyone pretty well and am a little more socially aware so I haven’t done it like that again XD
It happens XD And then yo…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@loopylin @euodia-vision @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @lightoverdarkness6
Okay y’all, here’s a scene I wrote a few days ago. The two boys are in one of the gang’s hideouts – an apartment – all by themselves, while Seb’s father is away doing his villainous things. This is like, six years ago. I’m still fig…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yeah. And maybe it helps people on here to share those emotional elements and feel heard, which is one way to go. I HaVe EmOtioNs ToO, I just don’t necessarily need to talk about them on here. Except I worry that can turn into a bad thing. If I’m avoiding sharing them, is that bad? Am I insecure?? XD
Ok, isn’t everyone insecure to an…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
…I’m not sure. I’ll get back to you if I think of any.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Mmm, I see…
Well sorry to disappoint you but there were no pirates involved in my disappearance.
I wish it was pirates. That would’ve been sweet.
Rather, it was bees
… a lot of bees
But, I mean, pirates, bees, same thing, right?
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Everyone reads for different reasons. I think I’m in a stage of life where I write and read to process emotions, barely for fun. Like I don’t even care too much if writing is similar or too emotional– I just need it. So naturally it felt like something was missing from your writing; but in reality; we probably write/read for d…
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
I DON’T KNOW
PIRATES CAUSE PROBLEMS SOMETIMES
YOU SOUNDED LIKE YOU HAD ENCOUNTERED SUCH A TROUBLESOME FACTER IN THE PAST COUPLE DAYS
– So I took the liberty of guessing
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
I’ll be praying too! I hope both y’all’s dads find new jobs soon.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Thank you!
@everyone
I hope you guys all know you are more than welcome to ask for prayer request too! <3
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yeah, I don’t share a lot of emotional stuff from my projects XD
Um… I guess I’ve seen so much writing focused on the emotions of the characters, like, aggressively so, that I’ve just learned to avoid writing those same patterns. And my characters – especially Sebastian – are also extremely self-aware, because they almost subc…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
I totally will thank you for telling me! I’m in a similar place, m Dad’s on unemployment and my mom is looking for work ;(
Love you to! Always feel free to give me prayer requests!
Lol I was referring to the same competition I missed before. I guess it made a impression on me. Thank you for caring!…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 12 months ago
I wanna say watch proposal videos but search results for that might be a little weird, idk lol. I would say try to make it specific to the characters –if you can, maybe give them an inside joke or something like that, or maybe one of them quotes something the other said earlier, if that makes sense. I love scenes like that 😊
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Praying for you and hoping you heal and get better soon!
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