GodlyFantasy12

@whalekeeper

Oki, let’s do this.

Everton’s biggest struggle is pride. If he gets a chance to prove himself to someone or make himself look better, he’ll probably go for it. He has this mindset of, “I deserve better than some people are giving me.” (Specifically his father). He desires freedom and wants some level of control over others, b…[Read more]

@acancello

Hi guys!! I’ve missed you all SO much, and want to apologize for just leaving.

So glad you’re back!! I’ve missed you too!! 🥰

A lot has been going on in my life lately, I started driver ed finally which is going pretty good (Boring though 🤪) I finished my novel and two edits and a few of my friends are reading it to edit it now. I think…

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@jonas

Yes!! My friend literally just told me about it today, but he didn’t give enough details!

@rae

What are the main characteristics in Alpha that you want to keep?

Personality is a result of purpose. We have a purpose for every character in a story, whether big or small.

Alpha’s purpose is shown through his theme, his drive in life, his passion, or his response to something that changed his perspective forever. What is Alpha’s pur…[Read more]

Y’all may theorize all you want… hehe

@esther-c

Sure!! 😊 Scenes and motives are great!

@lightoverdarkness6

You’re good! Dylan’s family situation reminds me of Rapunzel, not going to lie. Sounds like an interesting dynamic to play with.

I can’t memorize this Shakespeare section for school 😓 Creative break to wind down…

@godlyfantasy12 @rae @freed_and_redeemed

You’re good, Godly!! You can totally take a break whenever you want to 😊

Hugo

“Nice to meet you, bud. But you should get something for that eye…”

The crowd, overflowing from the next free period, was no place for a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m so sorry I’m just now responding! 😭 I was on vacation all week and the wifi was pretty terrible 😅

Okay so if it’s not too late I’ll add my charrie Dylan in.

Here’s Dylan’s description:

Appearance: He’s around 18/19 years old, he has dark hair, deep blue eyes, and tan skin.

**He runs his hand through his hair whenever he’s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh my goodness I never gave you that snippet from Adrian’s POV!!! Do you still want me to write one, or do you just want to go for it?? I’m not sure I included Ev or Adrian’s motivations in their descriptions, so that might make it easier. Whatever you wanna do.

@princesachronicle22

You’re totally fine!! I get that 😉 If you don’t get to it soon, I might do it. I just haven’t felt like RPing lately. XD

@whalekeeper

AHHHH!!! I love it so far!!! I love seeing my charries written in the style of another writer. <3

@loopylin

I have not forgotten about Ellie&Seb. I am just going to wait a little longer for @godlyfantasy12 in hopes that a couple subplots are not buried :]

@rae

Do you want help pinning down his traits? I’ve just noticed you mention how hard it is to write Alpha quite often.

Oh phew, thank you for the positive feedback XD I was so worried someone was going to be devastated.

Oh, and I also like Jonas’ point about one-note motivations. It’s probably one of the hardest things to hide from the reader’s notice. I personally believe it is okay, even great, for a character to have one point to them. One deep-set motive. But if you never show that motive, and instead make up a few secondary motives that demonstrate how the…[Read more]

I agree with @jonas that I haven’t seen much of a difference between Nahim and Alpha, and maybe that’s why I have a hard time distinguishing between them. This is, of course, coming from someone who has only roleplayed with one of those characters and seen limited material based on the other… so that’s very likely a me problem. *shrug*

But I…[Read more]

@keilah-h @esther-c @lydibug @loopylin @jonas @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @rae @lightoverdarkness6

Prologue
I know I’m imaginary.

You’re reading about me right now, thinking smugly about how you’ve seen a self-aware intro before. But this is me, not another imaginary narrator, so I’m just going t…[Read more]

@keilah-h @esther-c @lydibug @loopylin @jonah @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @rae @lightoverdarkness6

Okay *ahem* Is this mic working… *tap tap* okay.

Intro/Things You Need to Know

The biggest thing to know is that your character may be a villain. Even if they are a hero in your story, they may show a d…[Read more]

@grcr

You don’t need to feel bad, that’s perfect I think!