freedom

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I love it!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… maybe you could bring Riker to a point where he starts playing what-if scenarios in his head. Like “What if God does really love me?” “What if I can actually be forgiven?” Etc. to where he eventually starts believing it. I’m sure he’ll fight it at first, but then he just finally…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello @grcr (you’re gonna love this scene….lol) @freed_and_redeemed @anyone-else-i-forgot

Here’s another scene I wrote while revising…

Note: I’m changing it so that Sef has a crush on Cassian (Lilitu’s older brother) BEFORE she falls for Lilitu. So don’t freak out, Lefse is most DEFINITELY still a thing! <3

Sef cowered…[Read more]

@esther-c

You’re fine girl!

@freed_and_redeemed

I love it! I stalked your instagram…XD

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh my goodness the poor darlings 😭😭😭 I need to see them happy and healed soon 😭

I loved Leon’s confrontation scene. *hugs him* And Isaiah is so sweet 💖

And Riker 😭😭😭😭😭  *hugs him too*

Humanity wasn’t ready for the internet. How life is fundamentally lived changed within a generation with the introduction of phones. That was uncharted territory, we’ve introduced trials of mental, physical, and social health never seen before, and we had no way to prepare for that, because of how fast it came about. Why talk to real people when…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… stubborn characters can be troublesome.

Here are me thoughts. Use such as are helpful, discard such as aren’t.

• He already can’t live with his guilt/shame/hopelessness. That is quite obvious. He just needs to realize what is already clear to everyone else including the reader.
• Due to the very fact that he hasn’t…

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@trailblazer

Thank you for the suggestion. I use the ESV app mainly and occasionally go to the LSB. The problem is that sometimes I can’t remember a word, or I have it memorized in a different version. The ESV app at least requires you to be very precise in your search, no typos allowed. Perhaps I should try something that searches multiple…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Hurry up and get to the end when they’re all redeemed alreadyyy!! 😩

Jk jk 😂😂

Great job though, girlie! I loved reading some of your writing again!

@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you so much for the update, the poor dears. They need some help. And maybe some tea and cookies.

So…I have some feedback for Riker’s scene. I am supposing this is nearing the crisis point of the second book, as Riker is getting a broken record sensation with his guilt. Otherwise…ooof. That was a hard scene.

Also, I…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Even Hans had ended his own life in a moment when Riker could have stopped him in his tracks.

And then I cried.

@freed_and_redeemed

You should absolutely start babysitting! It’s so much fun!

@freed_and_redeemed

Lol, there I go trying to use your old tag. Oops. ^^

@loopylin @rae @lydibug @beth-torres @freed_and_redeemed @theducktator @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @livingwoodchronicles @trailblazer @theshadow @godlyfantasy12 (guuurl, you ded but I’m tagging you anyways)

Song challenge!

Choose a character, think of their story and v…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed Hey girl!!!! 🫶🏻❤️ I’m glad things are going well for you!!! Miss ya!!

@esther-c @acancello @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @grcr @anyone-else-i-forgot

Hey guys! Just popping back in to share a scene from Andromeda haha!

This is the new chapter one….XD

I’ve been working on writing a bit and I decided to scrap the beginning and rewrite it! So here’s the first chapter:

Strong arms grabbed…[Read more]