Folith-Feolin

@whalekeeper

Ikr? He’s trying so hard to keep everything to himself. I mean he does go on long philosophical rants to his cat but that doesn’t really count lol

@loopylin

I’m so glad you want to read more! That makes me so happy thank! <3

@keilah-h

I’m so glad you like it thanks!

@trailblazer

Hello! I’d love to give feedback! 🥰

1, does it draw you in and make you want to read more?

I drawn in by the character relationships! Knowing this is the first draft, I think it could be better if we jumped into the relationships before the historical events. I’ve read some classic his-fics (Johnny Tremain, five out of five stars),…[Read more]

@rae

I knew how Nar would be, though I also had never written her POV, but Jr is like…trying to describe the taste of mango without saying mango. Nearly impossible!

Relatable 😖 What helps me is to find some solid values and then play them out in an interesting way.

Not that I’ve written her much here, but Babs is a type 6 and wants security for h…[Read more]

@loopylin

*tries to hide an undignified snort* hehehehehe

I think his fragility will wax and wane XD Right now he’s strong.

@loopylin

I have no idea if any of my characters would like to write, but maybe they’ll chip in 😀

@rae

I am working on Ben’s voice because I’ve never written his POV, so please give me grace XD I’m testing this and that. The problem is, for he first book, he is literally nine years old in physical age and was way more gentle and fragile, so I’m trying to decide how much of that should carry forward ;P

Ben

“But I just came from…” Ben…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @smiley

Would y’all like to start this RP up again or modify it ect.? I can’t be super steady on here, but I can at least rp 1-3 times a week.

If y’all do want to continue it, I’d like to insert a character perhaps.

@freed_and_redeemed

O_O I’m not sure I want to see this scene.

Poor villains. They can seem nice at times, and we as the authors know what they really need, they just never choose it.

I did once have my twin feeling kinda bad for one villian though, untill I told her he murders his brother.

She doesn’t like him now at all for some reason.…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Still. *crosses arms* XD

I do understand though. Most of my antagonists are the MCs, but I do have a several villains and antiheros scattered through out. Along with a few I sometimes feel sorry for everything I’ve done to them.

@freed_and_redeemed

Freedom! *Slams hands down on table* Why are you trying to make me sympathetic for Hans? I thought he was a villian. This is not allowed!

Because I may get too attached. *Sniffles and storms away*

Interesting scene though. XD

The adds do appear to be only when one is logged out. They haven’t actually appears in a topic though, except t the bottom of the page, so I’ve been clicking on random stuff in Recent Topics to access the log in block.

And Waley, stuff has started taking a good long while to update for me too. *Shrug*

I’m having a lot of problems seeing the updated page 😕 It just isn’t. Updated, I mean.

@mineralizedwritings

Kaine! Share yourself with others before you get pulled into drama so they can save you with love if you need it!! DUde!!

@loopylin

Good with me!

Btw, me, my brother and mum use noise-canceling earplugs too. They only cancel a layer of the noise so you can still hear what’s going on, but they do wonders for anxiety. I’ve also used – weirdly – rose tinted glasses. I only used them a couple times, but it’s the same concept – they cancel out a layer of visual.

@rae @g…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thank you <3

@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone else

I wanted to share a snippet! I’d say this is from book 4. Also y book has been changing so much recently and I realized yall don’t even know abt this plotline yet, so I guess it isn;t exactly spoilers.

I’m pretty proud of how this turned out,…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed HEYOOO! about to head to bed BUT gonna RP before that! BTW Freedom, what class do u wanna attend? Maybe one where some others are?

Paxton

Paxton smiled as Wolfie went on, talking about his brothers, and painting.

“Do you still like to paint and sketch?”

Paxton nodded. He indeed did, though he was finding less…[Read more]

@rae

He could draw the whole yearbook XP

Ben

Ben pointed at the drawing. “That’s me, isn’t it? You squinted at me real weird, and that’s what told me.”

The boy gave him a long, depressed stare. Then nodded.

“Score!” Ben bounced his knees – not just as a celebration, but because he was already itching to transform into one of those wolves. But…[Read more]

@jonas

The classes are way looser now, so you can use the teacher whenever.

@rae

Yeah, I figured Chase shifted like that. I just thought it would be funny to have a character who realistically shifts, and always has to deal with putting his clothes back on XD We’ll see how he manages! And yeah, Chase could write, if you feel like that’s…[Read more]

@rae @godlyfantasy12

Ben

It felt so free to be a single child!

Ben tossed his underwear out the window and scrambled out, along the frame and up the brick wall.

His tail twitched, so the sun rays flashed off and on in his eyes. Warmth trickled into his tiny rodent body – first through the skin folds connected to his armpits, then seeping into…[Read more]