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@freedomwriter76 @smiley

These two are written in a style that is way not my usual limited omniscient view, part of the reason they’re now joining this castle. So if the voice jumps around a bit, blame Jay.

Jayson Barans

Long gloomy halls after long muggy stairways. Just a few minutes in this place and the dark ages were making a lot more…[Read more]

@smiley @freedomwriter76

Alright, first quick descriptions.

Jayson Barans

Appearance: 5′ 10″, wavy brown hair, hazel eyes, lightly suntanned caucasian. 17 years of age.

Nationality: Canadian American. {Polish, Native, English, Irish.

Pastimes: cross country running, martial arts, books, viola, parkour, firearms.

Religion: Apostolic…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

That’s me ALL THE TIME!!! I thought I was the only one!!!!

OH MY GOODNESS girl you are NOT the only one XDXD Ikr!!!! It’s just like ooooo I rlly love this idea….let’s start a google doc titled short story and not come back to it for seven months shall we??

XD

What’s some of your favorite prompts? 😀

@scripter-of-kingdoms O…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

If Hugo was real…I would totally have a crush on him 😂😂😂 is that bad???

😍 💗 😍

You feel that way??!! TYSM!!! You made my day!! Oh my gosh, I never thought I could make a character that realistic!!!!

(And no, It’s not bad, I have crushes on characters all the time, seriously 🤣)

@overcomer

Beautiful. The way you used layered meanings of words is making me want to get my violin out and sing. I love the ambiguous speaker who could be just anyone; you, me, a fairy child…it makes my imagination shiver.

I don’t have any real critiques, but as I just ran across this two months after it was posted, I suppose that doesn’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Ahh, good. *Sigh* At least he doesn’t break your reader’s hearts too much.

Also, and this is random, but I just love the name Yosef. It’s one of those names that just feels perfect.

*Contemplates whether these two would help calm anything.*

*Crickets*

The more I think about this, would y’all mind if I did add…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yep! It’s a great time waster… XD

@loopylin

Thank you! <3

Lol yeah… I’m taking college chemistry and I’ve never had a in depth chemistry course before. I mean I knew what electrons were…?

@whalekeeper

Lol he’s embarrassed by your immaturity? 😂😂

XD yes! I listen to the lofigirl synthwave radio 🤩 I used to listen to the normal one too, but I like the synthwave better. But tbh, I can’t listen to it for more than 2 hours a day because it’s a little too much.

I still do not have a phone, and everyone else in the homeschool group does…

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@rae

Kind of. He never speaks about it, but does not try to hide it (If that makes scene) He just refuses to tell anyone or talk about it, and keeps it to himself. But is someone catches him crying, he just lets them watch.🥺

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

yeah let’s make up a villain!Or maybe we just throw them into a mind games labyrinth they have to escape together? XD maybe it needs a key but you have to find the bad guy who will give you the key?

@savannah_grace2009

(The world does not revolve around Otto…sighs)

I have to tell that to Hugo🤣

@rae

With Vikii dying in Hugo’s arms, that makes me cry, cuz I have a character who’s first love died in his arms just before he was about to propose! And the same character falls in love later (like two hundred years later, cuz he is immortal) and gets married! They are so similar in that respect!

Thank you! They both have such a swe…[Read more]

@trailblazor

Yeah that makes sense! When I’m by myself, I’m a lot more attentive to safety/my surroundings than when I’m with somebody else, and that takes a lot of mental energy, so yeah the busier the store the more overstimulating would make sense.

*a stalker appears from the shadows*

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Isaiah lost SON? You Killed Judah? 0_0

And Eleanor…what has your author done to you?

*Glances at characters*

*Contemplates inserting two in this sadly mistreated group*

@whalekeeper

*Shrug* 😅 I have five younger siblings, a sick mum, and late high school anxiety, so… yeah.

Oh wow XD You’re the oldest? That’s a full house lol

I just feel frustrated with my place in life, where I know I could do more if I was in a different environment. Don’t get me wrong, I love my family, but we’re not a naturally academic lot,…

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@savannah_grace2009

Maybe! That would be fun, although Hugo already has a wife in the future (So sorry Ottoline! lol)

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @oh-man-I-feel-like-I’m-missing-someone-sorry-whoever-I-forgot-😭-😂

(Ok, well that last tag was just obnoxious and probably unnecessary. 🤣)

Alrighty! I’m adding in a villain who needs a lot of development.

Firouz Kian al Ezhdeha 

He’s 6 feet tall and has blue eyes, but th…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hugo and Ottoline are literally PERFECT for each other!!!!!!! I love Hugo!!!

Thank you! They are perfect!

As legal guardian of Otto, i condone their marriage and a happy life together, lolllll

🤣 🤣 😂 💗