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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@grcr @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
So I know I promised two chapters today, but I wanted to look over them one more time before posting and haven’t gotten the chance to do that today. Whoopsies. 😛 So I’ll post them tomorrow. 😁
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Beauty and the Beast….but a Marvel retelling? Count me in!!!!
I used to love doing those with random Star Wars characters.
Ooh, and I actually think Bucky could be some kinda beast…..But not too animalistic. I could draw some ideas if you’d like.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh you could have totally used them. Ev would have been flattered. XD Actually, he would be shocked that anyone could look as “awesome” or “charming” as him. Throughout the first book he jokes around with Asher—his brother—about him being charming and Asher’s like, “Um, no.” 😂
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper Never taken a personality test in my life lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic hi it's meeeeeeee in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I know the question wasn’t meant for me but…..
I’d take the book.
If it’s not a book of boring lists, I’d read it. I might think it drags on and is uninteresting, but I will take most books over teeth pulling.
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh, I didn’t know that. Thanks for letting us know though, I appreciate it. ❤️
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lukas
Lukas poked two straws into the milkshake, then motioned with his head. The two bent down at once, lightly knocking heads. Lukas chuckled, avoiding her eyes. But then they leaned in again, and this time Lukas couldn’t avoid her eyes. They were blue… so blue… but not just blue. They were like the ocean—endless and mes…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Actually, no, lol. I may indirectly though. I just google it XD
The guy in the bottom right corner is the same guy in Ev’s face claims. (I think I may deleted the face claims I have XD I’ll have to find them again, lol)
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!! (Oh you’re fine. XD)
I love the moodboard though!! Lilitu kinda looks like Ev actually 🙃
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh, I’ve been looking at that lately. Yeah, it’s kinda hard to understand. XD I’ve just used it for inspiration or help with forming a character’s arc. I basically just read as much as I need to know about a certain type then move on, lol. It’s really interesting tho.
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
And for your enjoyment… the mock cover…

(Sorry, had to cover my last name XD)
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Esther started the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Hey guys!! I think it’s about time I start sharing my WIP since it has changed drastically from the first draft I had shared on here 🫣
Any critiques are welcome, but if you just want to read it that’s totally fine too!
I have 20ish chapters written, so I still don’t have a good chunk of the book written yet. I’m not sure how often I’ll be postin…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Welcome to Kingdom Pen, Stephanie!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!! I’ve written fantasy, but my current WIP is light dystopian. And, I have lots of story ideas in a myriad of genres.
I am not taller than my mom 😔 But I guess she’s a little above…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@Princesachronicle22 @Thearcaneaxiom So sorry this took so long!!
Dylan
Zyrin bumped into me as I stopped short. “Did you hear that?” I whispered.
His eyes widened and he nodded.
The two of us crept forward through the dimly lit hall, the voices growing louder as we approached. I quickly peeked around the corner and sized up our possible o…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
And my personal favorite…

I could make so many moodboards for them, y’all… I love them so much XD
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @acancello @anyone-else-idk-XD
So I tried a new style of aesthetics… And I really like it so I think I’m gonna make so more. Stay tuned… 👀✨
But for now, these are the first two I tried:

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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ok, I think I’ll skip ahead cuz I don’t know what else they could talk about rn. XD
Lukas
They ate dinner without too much of an interruption from Xandro, especially after Lukas bought him his first hamburger. The waitress came back as they finished and asked, “Can I get you anything else?”
“I think I’ll have a milkshake,”…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
They all look so amazing!! ✨
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
Your characters have so much personality! Also, you’re great at hair : )
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @loopylin
Thanks guys! <3
And yes, he has a kitty names fluffy. She’s a little more scruffy than fluffy now XD
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