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Active 3 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Well, I’m doing pretty good. I had a lot of back and shoulder pain yesterday due to yard work and my scoliosis flaring up haha but I’m feeling better. I took a break from writing yesterday bc of it and watched Captain America: The First Avenger instead😂
Aw, that’s no fun. Except for the fact that you got to watch Captain Ameri…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Do any of you play-punch their older brother in the stomach as you pass by?
Or, get really mad when someone insults him, but insult him yourself all the time?
I doooo 😂
I actually do it to my younger siblings more often than my older brother. 🤭🤣
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley
Eleanor. XD
Jayson“Who are you?!”
Civilians. Great. No firearms necessary. I latched my watch back on my wrist and scrunched my eyebrows at the young lady. Faint British accent, over aggressive manner. Probably scared out of her witts if I had learned anything in Psyc.
Raphael slid his hands in his pockets with a sma…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Note: we are still sorting out Raphael’s family history/denomination, so, besides knowing that they’re very observant, that’s kinda in the air. While he does end up messianic, he’s not quite there yet.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
These two are written in a style that is way not my usual limited omniscient view, part of the reason they’re now joining this castle. So if the voice jumps around a bit, blame Jay.
Jayson Barans
Long gloomy halls after long muggy stairways. Just a few minutes in this place and the dark ages were making a lot more…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Alright, first quick descriptions.
Jayson Barans
Appearance: 5′ 10″, wavy brown hair, hazel eyes, lightly suntanned caucasian. 17 years of age.
Nationality: Canadian American. {Polish, Native, English, Irish.
Pastimes: cross country running, martial arts, books, viola, parkour, firearms.
Religion: Apostolic…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic hi (again) in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 10 months ago
That’s me ALL THE TIME!!! I thought I was the only one!!!!
OH MY GOODNESS girl you are NOT the only one XDXD Ikr!!!! It’s just like ooooo I rlly love this idea….let’s start a google doc titled short story and not come back to it for seven months shall we??
XD
What’s some of your favorite prompts? 😀
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Allison replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
If Hugo was real…I would totally have a crush on him 😂😂😂 is that bad???
😍 💗 😍
You feel that way??!! TYSM!!! You made my day!! Oh my gosh, I never thought I could make a character that realistic!!!!
(And no, It’s not bad, I have crushes on characters all the time, seriously 🤣)
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Koshka replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Beautiful. The way you used layered meanings of words is making me want to get my violin out and sing. I love the ambiguous speaker who could be just anyone; you, me, a fairy child…it makes my imagination shiver.
I don’t have any real critiques, but as I just ran across this two months after it was posted, I suppose that doesn’t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ahh, good. *Sigh* At least he doesn’t break your reader’s hearts too much.
Also, and this is random, but I just love the name Yosef. It’s one of those names that just feels perfect.
*Contemplates whether these two would help calm anything.*
*Crickets*
The more I think about this, would y’all mind if I did add…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yep! It’s a great time waster… XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Thank you! <3
Lol yeah… I’m taking college chemistry and I’ve never had a in depth chemistry course before. I mean I knew what electrons were…?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Lol he’s embarrassed by your immaturity? 😂😂
XD yes! I listen to the lofigirl synthwave radio 🤩 I used to listen to the normal one too, but I like the synthwave better. But tbh, I can’t listen to it for more than 2 hours a day because it’s a little too much.
I still do not have a phone, and everyone else in the homeschool group does…
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Allison replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Kind of. He never speaks about it, but does not try to hide it (If that makes scene) He just refuses to tell anyone or talk about it, and keeps it to himself. But is someone catches him crying, he just lets them watch.🥺
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
yeah let’s make up a villain!Or maybe we just throw them into a mind games labyrinth they have to escape together? XD maybe it needs a key but you have to find the bad guy who will give you the key?
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Allison replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
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Allison replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
With Vikii dying in Hugo’s arms, that makes me cry, cuz I have a character who’s first love died in his arms just before he was about to propose! And the same character falls in love later (like two hundred years later, cuz he is immortal) and gets married! They are so similar in that respect!
Thank you! They both have such a swe…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@trailblazor
Yeah that makes sense! When I’m by myself, I’m a lot more attentive to safety/my surroundings than when I’m with somebody else, and that takes a lot of mental energy, so yeah the busier the store the more overstimulating would make sense.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
*a stalker appears from the shadows*
Isaiah lost SON? You Killed Judah? 0_0
And Eleanor…what has your author done to you?
*Glances at characters*
*Contemplates inserting two in this sadly mistreated group*
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