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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@devastate-lasting XD they really don’t look good at a l l . If you want I can show you how my art has progressed over the years..
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Lin replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@gracie-j Literally lol.
@scripter-of-kingdoms Dude how do your old drawings still look so good?
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
LOL I JUST FOUND THIS REALLY OLD DRAWING AND I THOUGHT I’D POST IT XDDDD

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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
Lol, character art struggle: I was in the middle of this AWESOME drawing of one of my lil beans (lol I call my charries beans) and then one of the lines smudged…. I had to throw it out ;v;
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Kads replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I caught your post, thankfully XD
Well, my writing is getting better. Unfortunately I’m having way too many ideas and this is how one book became eight. XD I’m developing one of my charries further, her name is Faye and I’ll probably make a few posts about her somewhere… but yeah.. I have currently 15, 052  words in my novel…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Congrats!!
Well, I’m still trying to balance two writing projects, as well as alpha-reading for Kayleigh. My entire grade at my school got sent home because of a COVID case, so I have plenty of time on my hands now, lol!! I’m not very far into either of my WIPs (about two chapters each), but since I have the time, I’ll p…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
@e-k-seaver I’ve finished reading over and giving comments! Thanks for sharing!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
@e-k-seaver No problem! Haha yes, I saw them. I kind of got busy lol. I’ll get to them soon! Thanks for telling me!
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ella replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
I love this sooo much!!! Great job, Lexi!!! 🎉 To answer your questions,
1)Â I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!
2) Yes, I would!!! I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?
3)Â I think the pacing is great!!
Great job!!!!! 💛
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ella replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey Lexi!! I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!! Super excited!!!! Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉
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ella replied to the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey Em!! I loved your story!! Sooo good!! I don’t really have many critiques, just watch out for some repetitive words. And maybe give Celeste a stronger goal/personality trait? I felt like I was reading from Melia’s POV a lot of the time (which wasn’t necessarily a bad thing 😉) cause Celeste isn’t a bold character. I say this…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Aww absolutely!!! I’m glad you like it!!!
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Lin replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 @gracie-j @joy-caroline @godlyfantasy12 Ah I’m not really the type to write deep impactful quotes but y’all have really good quotes!
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Yesss!! You should do a persona!!! Aww, thank you, I’m really glad to hear that I inspired you!!! 😊
XD thank you I enjoyed making it
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@e-k-seaver Yep! That’s basically what a persona is. Most of my personas are for putting myself into franchises XD, but I have a few that are kinda like alternate forms of myself if that makes sense.
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Lin replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Nowadays I would say yes, because I think that I already used up all the Western-style names I like. I’ve even begun to reuse them for different stories. ;-;
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago

Okay so I knowww I already drew your character, BUT. The first chapter prompted this image BIG-TIME and I couldn’t resist, so heeere you go XD Hope you like it!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
@joy-caroline Awwww thank you sooo muchhh!!!! That’s amazing to hear!!!
To be honest, when I first wrote it I was imagining her guardian angel, but that works too XD I love that interpretation as well!!! I kind of wanted to leave it open though. Maybe it was a long-diseased relative come to escort her to heaven, maybe it was an angel, maybe it…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
Sounds great! I’ll give you the feedback ASAP:)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Also considering the fact that I write in first person, wouldn’t any of the writing be inner dialogue? Hehehehe *smirks*
So this is November describing how Ara looks after he finds her distraught in the Library-
  With her extremely pale skin and dull brown eyes, you almost wouldn’t be able to tell that this same girl was my best friend. Her…[Read more]
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