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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Poem Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
Of course! I’m glad I was able to help. You honestly don’t write poetry? I thought that that was excellent 😀 It was so much fun to read and interesting and yes, I just loved it!
YES!! That is amazing! Much better on the length and it fades the poem out more naturally, I think that’s sensational:)
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Thanks for tagging me!! Sorry I missed your sprint, but I hope you got a LOT accomplished!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 3 months ago
@abigail-m What about this?
Heed my words,
Listen well,
Because if you don’t,
You will fail.
Don’t give heed to tempting thoughts,
Or voices that would steal your heart,
Cold and dark you’re soul will be,
If you don’t listen to the words I speak,
Quiet the voice or pay the price
For you don’t want to be like me;
Don’t become the…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j @abigail-m Oh man thank y’all so much! I honestly DO NOT write poetry! I wrote this in the car in like 30 mins and was like “OH MY WORD this is actually pretty good!” Lol!! Ahhh i’m so happy and thanks for the advice!! I’m super excited to branch out and actually have it turn out well! I’ve wanted to write poetry before but never…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Poem Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 3 months ago
That’s alright, KP sometimes takes the line breakers out of posts and the paragraphs get joined, (it’s happened to me several times, but I’m not sure what causes it).
Number one, -I consider this the most important part of my thoughts on this- I loved your poem! Especially where the narrator refuses to put the mirror away and…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 3 months ago
For some reason KP didn’t space out the paragraphs and such like I had them
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Poem Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 3 months ago
@writerlexi1216 @gracie-j @seekjustice @joy-caroline@devastate-lasting @jodi-maile @godlyfantasy12 @scripter-of-kingdoms @nova21 @lydia-s @elfwing @godlyfantasy12@iluvhim18 @abigail-m @sparksaraabbott11 @daisy-torres@joelle-stone @mkfairygirl @issawriter7
Hey everyone! So, I am entering the TWN Contest, and im going to be submitting my poem…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Help Please in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Hi y’all, so I’ve got a bit of an issue I need some help with.
I’m currently drafting and while I know its anything but perfect (which is fine) I’m still struggling with something.
How do you introduce characters into a new world and to new characters without making it rushed and just….blech. Lol.
So a bit of backstory. My two characters,…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j @devastate-lasting @lydia-s @nanisnook @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl @joelle-stone @faith-q @lewilliams @writerlexi1216 @daisy-torres First of all, I wanna apologize that I’m not on here as much and am missing sprints with y’all! 🙁 I’ve been real busy lately. And second of all, anyone wanna sprint with me from :20 to as long as I can? 😀
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@nanisnook Thank youu!!
@issawriter7 Thanksss!! Right back at you!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Self publishing or traditional? in the forum Publishing & Platform 5 years, 3 months ago
@joy-caroline Hey girl! Sorry for the late reply lol. I published individually on Amazon, which was completely free! I may experiment with traditional some day, but for now, my budget will only allow indie 😂 I highly, highly recommend a YouTube channel named “Abbie Emmons”. She helped me figure out where I was headed with my novel. Her videos are…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Introduction in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
Yeah, it’s super cool! 😀
Hmm, not always, I don’t think. XD Avocados are actually in a subclass called “drupes”! Pretty interesting, LOL!
Oooh, hadn’t thought of it that way! XD
Oh, that’s super cool! You’ve been writing for longer than I, lol. Have you finished any novels as of yet? 🙂
LOL, that sounds so funny! XDD I love…[Read more]
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic Having Voice/Style Problems…. Help Needed! Desperately! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@faith-q That sounds like an interesting character! JC and Issabelle have already said most of what I was going to say, so here are a couple little tips I have for you (and @gracie-j too!):
I suggest you take a look at the stories you mentioned and watch/read them with a notebook on hand, writing down what stands out to you the most about the…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Having Voice/Style Problems…. Help Needed! Desperately! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Also, @gracie-j I just HAD to say that I LOVE your tagline. It’s pure gold, sis. XD
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Having Voice/Style Problems…. Help Needed! Desperately! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Wow, this is a tough one. I honestly get the struggle, I’m not entirely sure if I’ll have any helpful advice, but here’s just some thoughts.
The first thing I recommend is just to read everything and anything you can find that is a story told from a child’s pov. Especially ones with girls around your character’s age and maybe try to…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Hallo! *waves* in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@faith-q Haha, ofc you do! 😉
Awww, thank you! I’ve also been trying to get people to call me “Grey” for a long while but nobody did. So I made my new pen name Grey S. Park. (It sounds like Grace if you say grey + s real fast, too. XD)
Korean is definitely wayyyy easier than Japanese. The alphabet is much, much more simple. XD But at the same…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic What's your favorite type of villain? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 3 months ago
I must say that I go against the grain and like the powerful villains who don’t have sympathetic backstories and are just evil. Jadis is by far one of my favourite villains because she gives me such chills, particularly in The Magician’s Nephew in the city of Charn. Villains like Mother Gothel from Tangled who are powerful and com…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic What's your favorite type of villain? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 3 months ago
I ALSO ADORE JOKER LIKE AHHH
Joker and Harley…..YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!! (And Joker does have sad backstories)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic What's your favorite type of villain? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 3 months ago
Honestly my fav fav fav villains (book wise) would be those who are kinda snarky and sarcastic, and are more of an antagonist then a villain I guess. Like….you literally love them and they’re hilarious but then they go and do selfish stuff. Sorta like Loki. (Mainly guys…..cuz…..I like da guys…..ROFL)
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Katherine replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@nanisnook I’m so sorry I missed your sprint!🙁 I hope I can sprint with you next time though!!! <33
@lydia-s Yep, they went great!!! 😀 Thank you!!!! <33
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