Faith Q.

@daisy-torres You’re so welcome!!

@imwritehere1920 You’re welcome, girl!!! 🙂

@lorelei-writer Ooooh that sounds great! I love the way you’ve set the two characters up to meet and help each other. Now I wanna read the whole story…thanks for sharing the description! 😁

Awesome lines everyone!

@issawriter7 Hey did u ever get my email back about what I wanted u to make for me for my winning that contest thingy, and what I thought of what u sent me of Heir To His Crown??

@jodi-maile

Awesome!!! I’m so happy for you. 😆

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

LOVE IT!!! XD XD XD

@scoutfinch180

Poor Jake… :'( Love the lines, though!

@elishavet-pidyon

Ruben sounds like an amazing brother and an amazing character! I’m a fan already. 🙂

@koshka

Agh, I love the accent! Otto sounds like a fun guy. XD

@issawriter7

Aww, thank you so much! <3333

*chilled by first two lines* *heartbroken by the last line* I wanna…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Ooo… Asor sounds very intriguing… I especially like that last line… I have a feeling I’d be a big fan of his. 😉

@anatra23

That first line… XD *chef’s kiss* Love it!

@keilah-h

How cool! He sounds like a fun character.

@power

Oh. my. Goodness!!! Those are hilarious, and I love them!!! XD (I’m already a huge fan…[Read more]

@trahia-the-minstrel

No worries! Thank you for your input, I always appreciate hearing other people’s advice about this issue, since it is something I struggle with more often than I like. With relatively small short stories, I’m fine with restarting them, since a thousand or so words is not as big of a commitment to me as a novel is. But I…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

True, villains and antagonists don’t always need to be in a story. I’m usually writing some kind of story where they’re like, far away, so they don’t always show up in the main story (you know, like a Sauron kinda thing), so I always feel like I have to find ways to have them interact with the protagonist. But…I don’t always need…[Read more]

@lydia-s so sorry for the late reply! And thank you so much for your advice, I’ll definitely keep it in mind next time I’m faced with something like this. I ended up trying to rewrite it a couple times and on about the third try, I got something I really liked! So I’ve finished that short story now 😁

@princessfoo while your not trying to have God as evident as Gracie, I think perhaps @gracie-j can help you some with this! Not sure what genre your in, but she writes more historic fiction, and while she has God more evident, she may can help you because hers isn’t fantasy and so she can show you how to portray God realistically without making H…[Read more]

@kathleenramm Oh, almost everything. That you had to follow prose conventions taught in school or plot outlines that followed a specific formula, that your character had to go through a very specific and obvious development, that you had to write something that followed all of these things with a reasonable and expected ending…

None of those…[Read more]

@trahia-the-minstrel Oh good, thanks! And I’m 21 😁

@lorelei-writer LORELEI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 OH MY GOODNESS, I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU’RE HERE!! *jumps up and down* *waves wildly* (Did you know I was on this forum?)

Aaah, I’m so happy you’re here!!!!!!!!! *gives you a big cake*

Alright, alright, I’ll ask some…[Read more]

@lorelei-writer

So cool! A synopsis would be much appreciated, I enjoy hearing about other people’s works! 🙂

Yep, pretty much same. Ever since I thought to myself that I could write stories like the ones I was reading, I’ve been trying to tell stories XD

@trahia-the-minstrel That’s so cool! We might have the same ocarina! And Song of Storms is such a beautiful one to play. I love Song of Time too!

I love the inspirations for your story. The novel I’m planning to write is about a girl who has to save her country from an invading army, but this WIP is still in the very beginning stages of planning…[Read more]