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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Corvina! Yesssss
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Loopy replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
I love that! It was super sweet and it flowed really well. I think Min is right with the stanza thing, but it was still fun to read. Also, you could maybe put a period after “rude to me” and make “He was a gentleman” it’s own sentence to make the ending more powerful.
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Loopy replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
The premise of your story sounds a lot like Bendy and the Ink Machine,
Yeah… I’ve been struggling to keep my story from being too much like that. They are frustratingly similar sometimes.
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Loopy replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hello, I’m Loopy. I like writing a lot of genres, but mostly fantasy. I love poetry, but I’ve only done a little bit myself, and they were made to be songs or prophecies in my stories.
I like your name. Is it at all based off of Anne of Green Gabels?
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Loopy replied to the topic Hello there. Greetings and salutations. Other forms of 'hi.' in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hello and welcome to kingdom pen!
I’m thinking about maybe doing a serial style (like Hardy Boys, Nancy Drew) mystery series for younger kids with snakes as the characters. Main character’s name would be Ramen, only for the fact that I could then call him “Agent Noodle…” This would be in the far future.
This is adorable…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I’m not actually sure what the difference between horror and thriller is, but yes I have started some. I have one main scary story about old Mickey Mouse/ Felix the Cat style black and white cartoons. I also have another unfinished short story that is a murder mystery and there’s one of those kit-kat clocks (the old cat clo…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
:O That looks so cool! I love your world building
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings I know I’ve already said this, but Maylee is so cute 💕
Dante and Ellie
“I agree that we should move from this spot.”
Dante held back a laugh. He had never heard anyone speak as formally as Serin did. He was more used to the crude, common slang used by the people on his planet.
“Let’s go this way. I…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
All except Dante, anyway. He seemed almost disappointed
Hehe. Yeah, sorry. Dante knows how to deal with people being mad at him because he kinda stirs up chaos wherever he goes. However, he has never had anyone apologize to him really for anything, so he has no idea how to respond.
I mentioned some stuff about Pelgar’s s…
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Loopy replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
(imma just slip into the middle of this conversation don’t mind me)
Oh, I love absurd comedy, but I didn’t know there was a name for it until now. Alice in Wonderland is one of my favorite books because of it. I also have a couple (more mild) horror stories, but I haven’t shared them because I didn’t know there were other a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Hello humans (I hope) in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@c-j (thank you so much for having an easy tag to type out lol)
Hello! I’m Loopy. I like writing fantasy mostly and also drawing.
I have a couple newbie questions:
1. Do you have a favorite myth or fairytale?
2. If you were an animal, what do you think you would be? (Bases mostly off of your personality)
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@theloonyone oh! I have an idea. Milo could get a text from Cammie about the wind thing and then they can go find that group to make sure they’re ok. @keilah-h
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Aurivis
“You have other magic users in your world?” Feather asked. “In my world there are several types….to be honest, I have a few simple powers myself. The ones from my world have created structures and buildings like this…but I don’t think it was one of them.”
Different kinds of magic? Aurivis thought. These humans and…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
sorry this took forever!
Eddie
As Eddie’s drowsiness faded, her desperate need to find her sister grew.
“Ellie! Els!” Her voice had tired out from calling her sister’s name over and over. There was still no Ellie. She stopped and slumped against a wall.
Where is she? Is she alone, too? Is she with Dante? Would he hurt her if…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Serin is really cool, by the way. I love how you have a different cultural greeting for her people.
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings
Ooh love the fox profile! So cute!
Thanks!
Dante
Serin met Dante’s eye. “I apologize. I have a tendancy to… overreact at times. You see in Pelgar, where I am from, to reach out as if to touch someone when you are not family is seen as insult. Often used by enimies to goad us. It means to… force yoursel…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic incorrect quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Lol, poor Ilwyn
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Loopy replied to the topic WIP Idea (still making outline) for Kharvia Anthology S1B1 in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years, 8 months ago
@otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin
I finally got around to reading this, and I love it sooo much! I really like the magic system and the storylines. I wanna read it all right now, but it doesn’t fully exist yet. Do all the stories lead up to one big thing that happens (like the overthrow of the corrupt governments or something)?
Folith, you s…[Read more]
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