Faith

@freedomwriter76

CONGRATULAAAAAATIONS!!!!! 🥳🥳  That’s so exiting!!!!!

@princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6

Jack 

Just as Tyler spoke, the closet door swung open into the hall again.

Jack stepped out, still talking to Cody over his shoulder. “You can’t just slam the door in someone’s face. Come on out ‘an introduce yerself.”

He turned to the two out in the hall and gave them both a respectful nod. “Sorry for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Seriously, though, your writing style is my favorite. I can’t wait to read something you publish.

@whalekeeper

This might just be me being a grammar perfectionist, and you haven’t done it in a while, but I have noticed a couple times you have written sentences like this:

“He stopped at the door, listened.”

I’ve seen actual published authors do this too, so it’s probably not a big deal, but when I see it, it distracts me from the story bec…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude, I love your writing style so much though! I’m trying to find something in your role plays, but I might be better at critiquing a snippet (sorry you’re busy with school! If you can’t find one, that’s alright.). I’ll keep looking, though.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thanks! 😊

I wonder why I do it though?

Do you have any common tropes like that?

@keilah-h

Uh like a fourth of them are. I have a lot of characters XD

@keilah-h

Ok, well I can’t make him yell at them for something as little as that lol

Mr. Gregory 

Gregory rounded a corner and stopped suddenly in front of several (how many of them are there?) lizard-like students. One spun around and bared his teeth, but stopped when Mr Gregory wasn’t who he expected.

Who was he expecting, then?

“Sorry, sir…[Read more]

If you guys actually do end up doing a masquerade ball, I’d love to join later. That is, if there aren’t too many people already.

@whalekeeper @euodia-vision

Felicity 

“Decided to test the system?”

She shrugged. “School’s not really my thing.”

Lois looked at her disapprovingly. “You’ve never even been to school before.”

Felicity grinned at him and then quickly changed the subject.

“Anyway, like I was trying to ask earlier, what worlds are you guys from?”

She open…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh I did just realize that I have this one character dynamic that I always fall into. It’s where one character is the super chaotic one and constantly wants to go do things and they have a friend/sibling/coworker/whatever who is always really chill and tired, maybe a bit grumpy. The chaotic character is always dragging around the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

XD thanks

Oh, cool! What a nice coincidink. I never specified the color, so they can be white if u want.

@trailblazer

I haven’t, no, but the name does sound vaguely familiar 🤔 idk where I would’ve heard it before though.

This is great! I’ll have to try later 😂

I hope Chero is now entertained lol

@euodia-vision @whalekeeper @calyhuge

Felicity 

“Filthy children! Get out of here! Thieves!” A scratchy high pitched voice cried out.

“Is that pudding?!? I just cleaned that! Achk! Chip dust! Out, foul speck! Get out, get out!!”

An old woman with leathery skin and hair as white as Felicity’s advanced on them from across the room. She brandish…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah they’re pretty unpredictable, and in that, they’re predictable 🤯 At least, that’s how I write them (…Seb, since I don’t have any other official ENTP character yet). Trying to surprising, and always one-upping people.

Yeah exactly

I decided to stop thinking about it.

lol yeah probably a good choice

How accurate did you find your…

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@everyone Um just a note about Mr. Gregory: he may be a grumpy jerk and a huge rule lover and have high expectations for everyone, but he is a good guy. He cares about justice and has respect for people who earn it. If he finds out about what all the bullies have been doing, trust me, they will not last long at this school.

@whalekeeper

I’m g…[Read more]

Also entps are known as the “most introverted of the extroverts” so there’s that.

Sorry you got me onto the subject of personality types which is something I’m really interested in so I talk about it a lot

@whalekeeper

Yeah Dante is super easy and natural to write. I’m an INTP so I’m pretty much writing what I would do if I had way more self confidence (and, in the case of Dante, a broken moral compass). It might also be easy because my brother’s an ENTP. Idk. Or maybe they are easy to write because they’re so unpredictable?