@evelyn-collins
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Esther replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I have never read them, but I’ve heard of them. I know my friend described it as almost a staple of YA fiction at her school. As in, pretty much everyone had read it.
I’ve never had a big interest in reading it before, but as of now, I’m still deciding if I want to or not.
It’s interesting to hear different opinions on it! 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Actually, it sounds a lot like Quentin, the hero’s distant cousin. I mean, if names run in the family…
That’d be cool!
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Esther replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Oops!! Just noticed that someone else asked you about your favorite coffee. 😅
I’ll ask this instead:
5. If you could live in any country, which would you choose?
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Esther replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Welcome!!! I bumped into you on another thread, but it’s so nice to meet you!!
I am learning Spanish as well, and play the violin!!
As for my writing, I like a little bit of everything. I wrote the first draft of the first book in a fantasy duology; I am currently writing a dystopian trilogy; I have an idea for a biblical fiction a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks for the title suggestions!
Awesome!! Thanks for reading!
I’m sure your grandparents will love it!
Thx!! I really hope they do!!
I actually liked how you implied that they kissed but didn’t actually say so. I honestly think that’s cuter and more romantic than saying “he kissed her and…
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Awesome!!
The candy cane fingerprint!! I wrote it and I was like, “What in the world?!” And then I was like, “Let’s just go with it!”
XD
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Great idea!! I may add in Aloth. He’s the villain from my Refined Duology. He’s absolutely terrible. I don’t quite know his motive yet. 😅 I guess I’ll figure it out once I start writing him into the castle.
“Maybe we should start over…” the blonde young woman tapped her chin. “So, you’re Amidala, You’re E…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
It’s totally fine, girl!! I don’t think you’re copying, bc there are only so many good names out there! Lol. Their names go really well together!
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks so much for the feedback!! I’m really glad you enjoyed it!!
Yeah… I was a little on the fence about the kissing part, but I went with it anyway bc 1). I didn’t go into detail. 2). It’s supposed to be a bit Hallmark-y, if you know what I mean. 😅
I’m glad it made you laugh. After all, that was the point! 😁 Thanks fo…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Any title ideas are appreciated!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Part 1
Brynn Laurier handed Grandma the steaming bowl of soup. “It’s hot,” she warned, setting it down in front of her. Grandma took a large sniff of the soup. “Smells good,” she said.
Brynn watched as Grandma took a spoonful of the soup. She tasted it for a moment. “Perfect,” she proclaimed. Brynn smiled. Finally, she had nailed Grandma’s sou…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @arien @starofthenorth @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @anyone_please!!
Hey, everybody!!
So, I wrote a short story for my grandparents for Christmas. It’s supposed to be cheesy. I need all the feedback and critique I can get, please!!! A…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Cool character!!
So… I’m not sure if this is an actual name, but it just randomly came to mind.
Xavien.
Oops. Three syllables. 😅
I don’t have any other ideas now, but if I do, I’ll be sure to tell ya!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Ev… my boi… 🤦🏻♀️ 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Amidala
Ami winced as she toppled to the floor. Strong, but gentle hands pushed her off of the young woman she had knocked down.
The young man next to her helped the blond haired girl up. They exchanged a few words. Ami tucked her hair behind her ear and was about to push herself off the ground, when the dark haired man held out…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
That sounds really cool!!! You should totally go for it!!
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
I love your characters’ names though!
Thx so much!!
@godlfantasy12
IKR?!?!
I may have to write out of order for once… 😮 😏 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@those-I-have-yet-to-reply-to
I read through all the character name meanings and they’re great!!! I really like all of them! (I know I didn’t take to the time to tag everybody, but for real, I did take the time to read through all of them! 😅)
@godlfantasy12
Oooooh! It think I know who you’re referring to! I maaaay have peeked at the spoil…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic I'm making a comeback babyyyy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
But, yo, thanks for all the great ideas! Your brain is indeed genius. 😌
Lol
Thx. I try… 😁XD
Really interesting genre idea!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Forgot to tag everybody!
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @theloonyone @keilah-h @aagh!!-i-feel-like-I’m-missing-someone
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