@evelyn-collins
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Esther replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyrontheracanin
Oooh, so I don’t have any ideas for the next part of the story, but I think the boy should be named Griffin or Silas. I can’t choose which. 😛
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Ooooh, I’d be down for the boarding school idea. 😄 It’d be really fun!!
Ev
“Get called on a lot, Ev, don’t you?” Tony asked, as they got situated in the back row. “That’s why you know you don’t get called on in the back.” He pulled out his books, calculator, and other items needed for the class.
Sam smirk…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
Poor November!!! 😭😭 They do forgive him in the end… right?? 😢
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Alright. 🙂
Derek
“Nice to meet you, Derek!” Madeline said enthusiastically. “I’m sure we’ll soon be best friends.”
Derek nodded, keeping his forced smile. He glanced over at the tall man. But maybe you and I won’t be great friends, he thought.
“Oh, that’s just Sam,” Madeline explained. “Don’t mind him. He doesn’t talk anymore. But…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks!!! 😄😊
Oh ok, that’s a really good point. That’s a really good idea. Thanks for the help! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronarcanin
Yes, I agree, awesome cliffhanger! Can’t wait to see what happens next! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Here are my ideas for punctuation. I put them all in bold.
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever,
Desirable far beyond refined gold.
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether,
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb.
Turning simple to wise,
Righteous, rejoicing the heart,
Purely, the light of my eyes,
Cleansing…
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I liked the long RP! 😁
Thx!
Ev
Ev grinned at Tony and Sam’s messing around. But he seriously considered Tony’s offer to help in math and science. Those were his weakest subjects. And if he wanted his father to be pleased, then maybe some help would be needed…
No. He wouldn’t mention anything about it… for now. He’d do just fin…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Here it is!
(It is really weird for me to get used to using his first name because all my charries call him by his last name. 😂)
Derek Len
Derek eyes the two people in front of him warily. One was a girl who was the height of a child, and the other was a man probably a foot taller than Derek.
The girl smiled sweetly up at Derek.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
Exactly! Forgiveness is so important.
Janus! 😬 Oh boy.
And Ridley. I feel so bad for him! 😭 (Especially after reading his RP.) I’m glad he gets redeemed. 🙂
But I also feel so bad for Lyn. Poor girl. 😭
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NoVeMbEr?!?!?!
WhAt?!
I must know more!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Poor Ridley!! 😭
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Question first: I’ve been toying around with a few, but
The Scarlet Freedom is a favorite or just The Freedom.Oooh, that sounds so cool!! 😀
Question second: My favorite OC is Mr. Daniels (Scarlet’s first mate and an old family friend)
But my favorite to write is Scarlet. I think because I subconsciously put my own per… -
Esther replied to the topic Psst! Avast there. in the forum Historical 3 years, 5 months ago
@she-is-pirate
Oooh. I’d love to hear about your WIP! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Welcome to the wonderful crew here on Kingdom Pen!! Now KP had an official pirate. We should be honored. 😁
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amateur writer!! My WIP is dystopian YA.
Now for some questions!!
1. What is the name of your ship that you sail on? (Cuz every p…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooh, Madeline sounds so cool!
I love how she’s so short and she has some super tall guy to do her every wish. 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Ahh, Ami has a crush on Clint!! So cute!! ☺️
Ami
“Clint’s already meeting all the girls?” Another guy with dark hair and dark eyes said. “No fair. Gonna leave any for the rest of us to meet?” He put an arm around his friend’s shoulder.
He shoved his arm off. “Oh, knock it off. That’s no way to act around strangers.”
“A…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh, yes!!! The accent!!!🤣🤣
Yes, IKR?! 🤣🤣
I love that little story!! 😂
Reminds of a certain…Neverending Story perhaps??? 🤣🤣
What’s that? I’ve never heard of it, sry. 😅
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