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hybridlore replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I thought it was interesting! The beginning was slightly confusing, because I couldn’t figure out how Cedrick was narrating. But it has a very intriguing premise!
Isaiah seems… questionable, like you said. I would like to see Hana meet him.
If you add to it, please tag me!
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Enid replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
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Hi, Marcel! Are you excited to be interviewed?
[Puts his elbows on his knees, foot bouncing. Looks reasonably focused.] “Hi, nice to meet you. Is this like a job interview?”
How old are you?
“I got somebody to run all my physicals and I should be fourteen or fifteen. But there are strange things out there, things that should be in my…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Huntress
We arrived at the cave. At first, Sniper and I tried to start a fire, but there was no decent wood around, so we ditched that prospect.
Felicity stayed to the back, rifling through her satchel. She had a gun in there, some ink (weird, was she a writer?), some kind of currency, and a few tickets that said they were for a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Praying!!
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Enid replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
I love how both of those sentences are probably super accurate. Now I want to know why Fel wants to get rid of the robots.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Hehe, let me do it for you. *Boops him* *He doesn’t react* :]
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Enid replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
This is a weird question to ask, but does anybody want to interview Marcel? I’m feeling icky and can’t think straight enough for the roleplays. I don’t know, just want something cheerful to do. @loopylin @rae @godlyfantasy12 @savannah_grace2009
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃
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Enid replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I second what Ellette says. It depends on what things look like with my mom and how much time I’ll have between family stuff and working. But I would really love to do this!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Ohhhh that makes more sense.
And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ sla…
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Enid replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Boom, finally caught up
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Enid replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…
The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD
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Enid started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I would love to!
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot

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Enid replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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