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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
All I know is one of us is right…
Lolol!
Great quotes. He seems to have a lot of personality. XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I’ll have to listen to it later with my headphones!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Hah, yes!
Sure! By the way, I liked the moodboards you already posted. Amber’s was really pretty. *is now remembering that name, and wonders when she is coming into the story*
I see similarities between Joseph’s story and this one. It feels like we’re going to time jump (also, you said that this story is about a young man……[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
KP just ate my post and went really weird…
I like Jim a lot.
I knew his parents were going to die once they hid Jonathan, but before that, no.
Does the story time jump after this, or does the whole book happen when Jonathan is nine?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
This is beautiful XD I love y’all’s.
A woman with infinite real estate teams up with an ex-terrorist to raise the dead but are hindered by the interference of a vengeful former parent who bribes an orphan to work for him.
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I swear it’s not as bad as it sounds.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Haha, I don’t mind
Ew, no. This is just for fun.
[Marcel glances down at his freshly cleaned coat and shrugs. Loosens up, flicking his wrist cuffs.] Cool with me. If I’d known, I would have brought Enid.”
7990s?? What year is it now? It’s only 2025 in my world.
“It’s 8035. Maybe your world records time differently. I’ve seen some of y…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
I love that the “mentally unstable” descriptor doesn’t narrow down who it could be in the slightest lol
Hey! lol Yeah, I guess you’re right XD
If you can guess him, try and guess who his friend is then (hint: i don’t talk about his friend too often, and last time they made an appearance other than a possible mention of their name t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
This one isn’t written but I’ve thought about it:
A mentally unstable man and his mostly stable friend, among an also mentally unstable military faction, seek to end a war with an immortal being.
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Stopping at :55 and I think that’s enough to warrant a tasty drink and dinner. 😛
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I want to work on a short story! If I get a substantial amount finished, I get a chocolate nutrition shake. Starting at :25.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰
I love the smorgasbord of emotions slapped into this post 🤣
I was just thinking about it last night in bed and i realized that what you pointed out about Easton isn’t a huge part of his character arc as far as…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?
Yep
It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t know if it’s clean.
I read most of it at a getaway house by the ocean (one of my favorite recent memories), and it was a fun read. I didn’t finish it but at the time I ha…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I was not expecting it at all!! 😂🥺
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.
and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.
Now… 314???????!
And Jonathan!!!!
nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*Bounces up and down because I just researched this* Make full summary of the mystery solution and the story behind it. Something like, “the old lady killed the doctor. She raised alligators in her home because she was a reptile researcher. She trained the alligators to do this, and this, and this. Her plan played out like this. She did…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.
I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?
Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?
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whaley replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.
Dystopian classic. *Sighs emphatically* I remember reading one of the plot twists as a nervous little thirteen-year-old and freaking out. Really good book.
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