@esther-c
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay that’s a cool character arc then!!
I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD
And I’m glad that Hallie’s talking to God again <33 even if it’s slow progress
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Great! Does bio stand for biology? Because if so, wow. Biology is HARD.
Thanks!
I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.
Some of the material will depend on state and my…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@keilah-h @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @esther-c
Help meeee
I’m stuck *cries* I want to write over the summer but I’m strugglingggg
You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?
Yeah that’s…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@the_lost-journal @keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power @freed_and_redeemed @stephie @MineralizedWritings
My family went to a museum full of fossils today, which sparked a discussion…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
If there’s enough interest, we could try to plan one for late May/early June.
@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
@whalekeeper @stephie @loopylin @grcr @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @anyone-i-forgot
Is anyone up for a call sometime soon? We could try for the 2…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.
Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.
What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I just realized I forgot to reply here.😬 Good section!
Hallie just wanted to be dateless for the rest of high school just to spite Katrina.
*snorts* Take out the first “just” though.
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whaley replied to the topic Anyone else doing Crazy Editing Week? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ll start a post somewhere on CEW for KPers. I’d like to know who wants to join!
Additionally we should tag some more people so they are aware of this. I can explain anything people need to know.
@koshka @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @stephie @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision (did I get that tag…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay! I understand! Things can get very busy here, too.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
YES!!! Please sign up!
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
That is the most glorious thing I have read all week.
Then sign UUpppppp girl! *Pushes you towards CEW*
Because today I am now a graduate!!!
Yay! High school or college graduate?
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @linus-smallprint @esther-c @liberty @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @theducktator
Hey guys (well you’re mostly gals). Would you be interested in a goal-focused chat where we practice our individual writing skills and chat about…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Anyone want to take a survey for an essay I'm writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Good to see you popping back in here again!
I just took the survey! This is something I’ve been thinking about a lot lately. If anyone is open to discussion, I’d be curious to hear your thoughts!
For those of you who do have phones, what boundaries have you set/have your parents established around it? Or perhaps, what boundaries do you…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Sorry this took so long to get to. Everything’s looking good (although Hallie is frustrating me a little bit rn). Seriously Hallie, don’t fall for the trap!!
Anyway, the part in chapter 19 when Easton is doing all that stuff over the months, it feels a bit impersonal. Maybe if you wanted to show his character more you could have a sce…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year ago
Elina, what do you value most in a friend/friendship? What would break a friendship for you?
“Authenticity. If your not authentic, your not my friend. I had one friend I broke the relationship off with because she was only being my friend out of sympathy. I hate sympathy. It’s like knowing something, but not really understanding, you kno…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Anyone want to take a survey for an essay I'm writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Hey, everyone! How are you doing?
I’m almost done with my first year of college, and for the final of one of my classes, I’m writing an essay about technology use. In conjunction with the essay, I have to give a presentation of some sort, so what I decided to do was conduct a survey to hear from other people about the topic and show what I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Aw, okay! No worries!
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @grcr @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @theshadow @stephie @anyone-else
Just a reminder that the group call will be tomorrow morning, Lord willing!
10:30 EST / 9:30 CST / 8:30 MST
(I think I got that right? I’m not really sure about the abbreviations. XD)
Please let m…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year ago
Hmm… I feel like that’s a hard one… but when I think about it, I guess people motivate me, if that makes sense.
Definitely an enneagram type 9 character.
School. I try to do good, but I just can’t focus. If my mind decides to think about the cute dog I saw this morning instead of boring math, who am I to tell it no?
I smell u…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ooh, sounds really pretty! My sister wore a purple shimmery dress last year to Homecoming.
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