@esther-c
Active 12 hours, 57 minutes ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Are you using an iPhone or a computer? On my computer, it works fine. If it’s not working on your computer, I’ll have to find a different way to post it.
Hey, Esther, is it working for you?
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Well, a lot is going on concerning family relations. Not ones in my immediate family, but with our other relatives. My grandmother is moving out here soon, so a lot is going to change. There are going to be a lot of opportunities to deny myself and serve and love others. There’s also still tension concerning some other matters in the…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Yes! I’m glad to be here, again!
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@esther-c I love the story story/novella idea…a lot!
But I am going to maybe go against the norm here😂
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I think it would be more powerful if she wasn’t redeemed.
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Hear me out.
If she was a fairly good person in the beginning but allowed jealousy to consume her, though she can be redeemed if you want,…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@trailblazer Yes, Bryan Davis is amazing!! He’s one of my favorite authors, but my top is N D Wilson. I believe the quote I have on there is from Ashley Stalworth??? But I’d have to check XD I’ve had a similar time with writing, just able to get words on one of my stories while the others are somewhat stuck. We’re super busy and I just tore a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 months, 3 weeks ago
So, I know I’ve been on and off the forum (life is crazy y’all, I’m busy just fitting in YDubs XD), but I just wanted to let everyone know that I’ve finally gone and started a website!!! Hopefully this will give me some accountability and motivation to keep pushing forward.
How is everyone?? I feel like an old veteran returning XD
Home |…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
I have more of Matthias (and others!!)
A scene (although there may be more at the beginning of it) and a snippet of the next scene (although there would be a POV scene from the 2nd MC between these two scenes, of course) that I wanted to share!!!
here it is!!!
and I officially love Moishe even more❤️😭💖
“I was v…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Are you planning to continue the polls anytime soon?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Ooh that could go deep pretty quickly!
Esther 4:14: “For if you remain silent at this time, relief and deliverance for the Jews will arise from another place, but you and your father’s family will perish.”
God can always give a task to someone else to accomplish His purposes if the person He chooses says no. That’s really humbling…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
That’s a really cool idea! I love twisting tropes around. WRITE IT.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
RANT TIME (lol)
Soooooo, this novel with Matthias has a second MC (Stefan Nolan Nachtnebel) who will likely be a low-rank soldier in the Heer (regular German army; the entire military of Nazi Germany was called the Wehrmacht, which included the Heer, Luftwaffe (Air Force), and Kriegsmarine (Navy) (the …[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Anyone want a Matthias scene?
(also feat Charna, Moishe, and Avrum, lol)
Matthias followed Charna down the winding halls, his shoes echoing much louder than he once anticipated. The winding halls were dark, and dare he think it, even foreboding.
They seemed to stretch on endlessly, as if they were paths that led the…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
EEEEEEE
y’all have no idea how HAPPY it makes me that y’all like this new story idea!!! (esp bc Leon and Riker don’t wish to cooperate rn😭 but this idea won’t leave my head, so XD I’m actually currently writing a scene for it)
and y’all haven’t even met Avrum, Moishe (I am loving his personality already,…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c
Howard he will be. 🙂
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@esther-c you’re welcome!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@esther-c If you don’t have any ideas for your older story, I think it’s okay to set it aside and wait until you have inspiration.
I have tons of half-filled notebooks containing stories I haven’t written parts for in years (but who knows, maybe I’ll go over them again and think “Hey, I can use this in my next story if I change it up a…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Thank you so much for getting back to me! I’m so sorry I haven’t been around much…life just got so crazy and I haven’t had much time lately.
Writing has been really, really, slow…it’s kinda like I’m procrastinating and just being lazy but also genuinely confused and overwhelmed with my WIP!
Everything does make sense, and I’ll…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@esther-c @keilah-h Glad y’all like Matthias!! (I like him already too 😂)
Alright, so, time to share Matthias’ backstory and his story in his novel.
BACKSTORY
Matthias was born in April 1920, to Werner Richter, a German lawyer, and Sabina Becker, an American actress of German descent. The two met in the United States when Werner was there…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@esther-c Girl, I feel you completely.
I have felt that way before, and sometimes still do. My first true WIP idea was an American Revolution book. I thought it was going to be my first novel, my first story that would reach the world. Eventually, though, it just started to feel like it was so slow and just…everything wasn’t working out.
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