Friends – Activity – Esther

Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago

@hybridlore

Yes! I’m planning, Lord willing, to write a book with these guys in it.

I did notice a few times that some words you used were either typos or not words at all (or words I’d never seen.)
Thanks. I think I caught all of those.

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more w…[Read more]

Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago

@grcr

(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)

I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD

Enid replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago

@keilah-h

yours are so wacky lol

The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃

Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.

Life be like that sometimes.

FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago

@hybridlore

Thanks! Word was what I was having difficulty with. I’m going to see if I’m allowed to have an account there.

hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago

@theducktator

I do all the time and randomly remember during the day. XD

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIjmMlC28TT3c9eMUpg1-9ASZ71vtWpJMhcSz_dmI_Y/edit?usp=drivesdk

I’ll send the Word link to your email, if you want that one too.

FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago

@hybridlore

Can you try resharing the link? It just takes me to the login page. 😭

FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago

@hybridlore

Yay! I forgot it was Tuesday. XD

FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago

@the_lost-journal

Great! Does bio stand for biology? Because if so, wow. Biology is HARD.

@hybridlore

Thanks!

@esther-c

I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.

Some of the material will depend on state and my…[Read more]

Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago

@rae ohhh okay.

“blood eyes” sounds creepy but the concept properly described is actually really cool.

Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago

btw I’m still working on that one story I promised you. I just have to type it up.

I was gonna do it today but my dad called me over and is basically offering me a job at the architecture firm he works at. So I had to listen cause I don’t have a job yet and coloring over floor plans all day sounds more fun than minimum wage at a grocery sto…[Read more]