Esther

@ellette-giselle

Wow. Didn’t expect that.

Great twist!!

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ONE MORE.

@hybridlore

Every Sector will have its little pocket of decent. They might be rebellions, black markets, etc. Nothing as well organized as the group outside Sector 5 that eventually took over Sector 5

@ellette-giselle

So there’s two rebellions? Didn’t realize that.

@hybridlore

I know. It was.

Nathan is a Sector 1 rebel. They have no connection with the group in Sector 5

@ellette-giselle

Well. That was sad.

Poor Amber… and poor Ron. 😢

So was Nathan one of the rebels? And did 210’s explanation mean that the government is on to them? I wasn’t sure if I was reading that right.

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TWO CHAPTERS!

@esther-c

Growing up is so sad sometimes!

I’ll be praying for y’all.

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters. Nice touch of action towards the end! And that was a good cliffhanger. 😬

@koshka @linus-smallprint

I don’t know. If you can’t find it anywhere else….ask AI and tell it to cite its sources. Then you can just read the sources instead of whatever baloney ChatGPT spits out XD

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TWO MORE AND THATS ALL FOR TODAY

@linus-smallprint

That would be interesting, though as of this point they are not in active rebellion as much as restoration. 😉

Thanks! I’ll look forward to it.

Oh yes, I’m looking forward to hearing your thoughts on them.

Really, I don’t mind if you don’t want to talk about it, I just thought you wanted to.

@linus-smallprint

I understand what you’re saying about personal conviction. I believe God is still with you anyway.

I’m trying to respectfully discuss the conviction itself, since you have argued the rebellion in Ellette’s book is a problem. You challenged the morality. You already put morality on the table. Thus, I was under the assum…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I understand where you are coming from. I don’t agree with it. but I think that puts us in the same boat. (I’m pretty sure you at least understand where I’m coming from, even if you don’t agree with it.)

I’m totally fine with you not reading the second book btw, so this conversation is totally not about me trying to convince to…[Read more]

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ANOTHER NEW CHAPTER

Shall post two more today if I can.

@ellette-giselle

Is a POV blind spot bad?

Nah, not really. Depends on how you handle it. Females are 50% of the population and many of them must be firstborns. We know very little about them. It’s a world building thing, and you’ve had to choose where to spend your effort, so it’s not surprising you haven’t included them.

If you wanted to, all…[Read more]

nope. Still no pictures.