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August 20, 2025 at 4:33 pm #205244
Wow. Didn’t expect that.
Great twist!!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
August 20, 2025 at 4:37 pm #205245lol. That was fast.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 20, 2025 at 4:38 pm #205246I was reading a different book on my phone. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
August 21, 2025 at 1:32 pm #205252@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
TWO CHAPTERS
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 21, 2025 at 3:24 pm #205253
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
August 21, 2025 at 3:24 pm #205254Nooooo, my meme!
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
August 21, 2025 at 3:48 pm #205255I know!!!! Nothing is working.
Can you put an image link?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 21, 2025 at 3:50 pm #205256I don’t have an account where I made it, so I don’t think that would work.
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
August 21, 2025 at 4:02 pm #205257Great sections!
Rory is such a cute name. I love that scene. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
August 21, 2025 at 4:13 pm #205258?
are you sure??
wait, do you have Canva? You could share it with a Canva link.
thanks!!
cute? Not exactly the word the canes to mind when I hear that name…. ?And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 21, 2025 at 4:25 pm #205259What do you think of it as? The meaning?
I don’t know. It’s a cute name to me. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
August 22, 2025 at 12:17 pm #205287If you want to discuss the actual morality of rebellion, I am open to do so. I am curious to know why some Christians believe it is okay to rebel and overthrow governments.
But yeah, maybe it is best if I talk to someone older. I will see what Douglas Bond says in his books.
That was where I thought the conversation was going, and that’s why I slid in. I am not desperate to talk about it, though, if you weren’t originally wanting to. ? I do not want to overstep and make something into a problem when it doesn’t have to be.
I am still thinking through my own opinions, and while I strongly feel that I would rebel against a government like WWII Germany, it struck me while I was talking to you that I should find all the pieces and verses to arrange my opinion. You’ve done some great research already, and it would be a shame for me to push against you without any proofs. When I get around to it, probably after I adjust to my new fall job, would you like to discuss it for fun?
I am out of signature ideas
August 22, 2025 at 12:23 pm #205289I am also sorry if my previous comment came off as pushy. I was not frustrated at you at all, I was more curious than anything, and I really wanted to clarify what the conversation was about.
I am out of signature ideas
August 22, 2025 at 6:49 pm #205297August 22, 2025 at 11:25 pm #205309No sorry! I was gone like all day. Work, then my brother played two out of town soccer games…..
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
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