Esther

@mcmuffin

Honestly I like them all! Lol (sept for parts where it’s ether gore or inappropriate😬 ) I’ve only played Halo 1 and 2 and the arcade version! (I’ve also played Halo wars, but anyhow!)

Ah, gotcha. don’t have a favorite. XD Awesome though!!

Really I have a lot! Lol! Maybe… I don’t know.I like them all! :I

Hehe, I understand, lol!
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@beth-torres

This is a cool idea! So I have an app called YouVersion, and they have multiple reading plans on there that will take you through the Bible in a year. You could look at some of them and figure out the chapters you would need to read each day or week.

I don’t know if I’ll join or not, but just an idea to make it a little easier. 😉

@rae

Ooh, that’s hard.

Um… I don’t know if this is too dark or not, or even what you’re going for, but I remember in Harry Potter that Bellatrix was torturing Hermione (in the seventh book) and Ron and Harry couldn’t see what was happening, but they heard her screams. Obviously, it sounds worse in an actual movie than reading it in a book. But…[Read more]

@vinagirl

yes I’ve read the hiding place and I absolutely love it! Have you ever heard of Darlene Deibler? She’s also one of my favorites and she has an AMAZING book that I think is sort of similar to Corrie’s.

Oh cool, I’ve never heard of her. I’ll have to check that out!

Kaylin is the oldest child. She’s very protective, loyal and quick. But…

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@savannah_grace2009

Oh you’re fine! 😊

Fynn 

“I guess so. Sounds good.” He sauntered up to Lukas and bowed playfully, extending a hand. “May I have this dance?”

Lukas rolled his eyes and shoved Fynn’s shoulder, causing him to take a few stumbling steps backwards.

He bounced right back over to Liv. “My bad.” A laughing glance at Lukas. “Let m…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Awesome choices!!

@rae

Love ittt. 🙃

@savannah_grace2009

I love this! Abbie Emmons just confuses me the more I watch her to be honest…and the internal conflict stuff just wasn’t working for me and was soooo overwhelming, but you did a really awesome job of developing your characters!!

Thanks!

Yeah, she can be kind of vague sometimes. I feel like for me, it tak…[Read more]

@grcr

Heyyy, good choices. I love it!

Yes! You totally should! I don’t’ know cuz about your charries, but it’d still be fun! 😁

@freedomwriter76 (thanks for the idea! 😝) @lightoverdarkness6 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore

Okayyy! I’m copying Freedom, so you basically get to pick who you want to spend a day with. These are from different WIPs and I still don’t have as much as Freedom. (Does anyone really? &#x…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Umm… Yes please!!! I love this idea so much!! 😝

M’kay, here we gooo…

Fin, Leo, Wolfgang, Jacob, Iris, Ezra andddd… Erich. (I don’t think that’s exactly $25, but whatever.)

(I am so gonna have to do this with my charries now… 😏)

@freedomwriter76

Leonnnn 😭

@freedomwriter76

Oh my goodness! It’s so simple, but it looks so good!!

@mcmuffin

Welcome to Kingdom Pen!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl! I’ve written fantasy and dystopian, but I have some ideas for historical fiction and contemporary.

Sooo… now for some questions!

1. Favorite Halo game? (My brother’s played some of them, s…[Read more]

@rae

Sorry my response is so late! But I was finally able to get to this.

M’kay. So overall, I was a little confused at what was going on, maybe because some oddly worded sentences, or maybe I was reading it too fast. XD That’s the initial thing I noticed.

I’m not sure what other feedback to give. You said some parts were giving you troub…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith

My favorite book (besides the Bible, always number one <3) is currently “Beach Haven” by T.I. Lowe. My favorite author is probably either Toni Shiloh, Kristi Ann Hunter, or Becky Wade (all Christian romance authors)

Awesome!! I don’t think I’ve heard of any of those authors. I’ll have to look them up!

Captain Smek from “Home”, S…

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@hybridlore

I’m actually hoping to one day revamp the story, change up a few things, and rewrite it. It has a lot of potential from what I’ve previously written, it just needs a little help. XD

@hybridlore

Thanks! Yeah, I know. So many new possibilities for the plot… 😈

😂😂

@grcr

Thank ya!

Oh no, you’re fine. I don’t know if there is much more to say. 😂

@smiley

Thanks for the input, I’m still trying to figure out how I’m going to introduce everyone without info dumping

It’s a struggle

Yesss, I understand. It’s so hardddd 😭 But you’ll get better at it the more you keep writing. Like, I read a ton of stuff about writing and I watch a lot of videos about it, but I don’t really get better unti…[Read more]