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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?
I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Isaiah really does have a wonky moral code, ngl.
I know. But that’s what makes him interesting and why I had to write this down.
I like how the perspective is that of the not-dog, whatever he is. Him getting distracted by the food was hilarious.
Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Okay. I fixed that. Thank you!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 4 months ago
I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.
Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
Thank you! She’s entirely finished book one in this series, and the full thing should be in the document.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool.
Okay. Glad to hear that!
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.
And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
❤️❤️❤️
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I have a bunch of trips that I’ll be gone for, but you can start without me!!! I’m just not sure how available I’ll be until my schedule frees up in July. And I’m sure I can pop on every now and then in between being gone lol
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD
Yes please do!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
<3
I don’t go to camp until this afternoon so I’m really excited and nervous!!!!!!
Aw girl you’re the best <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.
Oh girl I’m so sorry *hugs* I don’t know exactly what you’re going through but I do know that cancer is horrible and sucks to deal with…if YOU need to talk to someone who (to some degree at least) un…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Okay that’s a cool character arc then!!
I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD
And I’m glad that Hallie’s talking to God again <33 even if it’s slow progress
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.
Oh goodness! that’s ridiculous 😂
Some of the material will depend on state and my driver’s ed program said that there were a lot of road sign questions and you c…
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 4 months ago
Yes! I’m planning, Lord willing, to write a book with these guys in it.
I did notice a few times that some words you used were either typos or not words at all (or words I’d never seen.)
Thanks. I think I caught all of those.The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more w…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)
I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 4 months ago
yours are so wacky lol
The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃
Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.
Life be like that sometimes.
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