@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHHH!!!!! NOOOOO!!! I think the slap from Frida is what is gonna get to Paxton…. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
He let out a shriek as the first brother attacked, punching Leo, sending him to the floor.
The other went after Reuben, but Jakob stopped him.
It was all downhill from there…
The older bro…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h not entirely sure what else to make Paxton say.
Paxton
Leo stood tall. Strong, despite the evil look in his brothers’ eyes. In his mother’s gaze…
Paxton’s breath hitched.
Would he ever be that brave?
He perked up at Wolfgang who seemed…Frozen.
“W-Wolfgang…?” He whispered. No answer. Gent…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon hola!! I’m headed to a rally thing but wanted to see if anyone was on right now.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHH!! @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
Reuben…Wolfgang…Leo…Jakob…Joshua…
They knew these people…
These…evil looking people…
Paxton gasped as he remembered what Wolfgang had told him before.
How they understood…understood what he’d been through….
Paxton’s eyes widened, fear gripping him. He looked up at Wolfgang,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHH!!! I have a feeling if they start beating up the bois Paxton might try to speak up “
*emphasis on try* my little shy guy…
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Feather didn’t get to respond before….
Yells..
Screams.
Begging.
Paxton’s blood ran cold.
Had his brothers come back? Found someone to torment?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
U think @elishavet-pidyon got kicked off again?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
hey y’all I’m changing a little something with Paxton’s appearance but it’s not noticeable so it shouldn’t really affect anything! But when I created his son (yes I’ve thought that far ahead XD) I realized I luv this idea way more then my originals so….
instead of just having small…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 awww ur poor charries!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h
Paxton
Reuben was smiling sweetly, comfortingly.
“It’s not your fault, Paxton. Not your fault at all.”
Warmth flutter through his heart and he smiled. A voice caught his attention and he jerked slightly, realizing whoever was speaking, was speaking to him.
It was t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Crosshair
“I’m sure you’re both glad you met.” said the boy–or really, the young man, not too much younger than Crosshair himself.
Feather happened to overhear. “Ha! He used to act like he didn’t care. Now his family takes up half his thoughts.”
Crosshair shot her a glare, although…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Paxton
Reuben didn’t seem okay…
But…maybe Paxton just didn’t know…
Paxton frowned, going quiet for a moment. He sucked in a breath, staring at his boots.
“I-I’m S-Sorry About m-my brothers…” Paxton started, voice slightly muffled by Hope’s fur against his face. “And…and m-my m-mother…”
Th…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 oooh! Anything interesting in the book so far? @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Paxton
The little boy glanced up at Reuben. The young man was running a hand through his dark hair, eyes shooting around the hallway.
Paxton watched with curiosity, thinking of how Ember often did the same to his own curls, usually with a hard…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 I’m on!
Crosshair
“Where are you from?” one of the boys asked. (how old are they? I know they have to be younger than he is, but….)
Should I tell him? He’s not going to believe me, Crosshair thought.
Although there was one part of his brain that remembered the previous time in…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka
Heyo! Anyone here?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Feather
She awoke with a groan. That winged creature had thrown her into the wall…..hard. What a bully!
“Is she all right?” came a couple of voices. Young voices.
“She’ll be fine.” replied Crosshair’s voice. She was glad the winged ruffians hadn’t hurt him too badly.
Feather…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
They were gone…
But they’d be back…
For him.
Arms wrapped around him and he tended, jerking slightly as he was pulled closer to Wolfgang. Slowly, his shoulder relaxed and he buried his face into the young man’s chest, quietly sniffling.
Frozen.
“It’s okay Paxton…they…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon do u wanna respond?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon welp…I’m currently sitting at our church cuz we have a fundraiser going on. Everyone’s finishing up pretty much so I’m just sitting here now…. XD
which I’ve pretty much just been sitting here the whole time cuz this is more of a slow fundraiser…..
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Paxton
”Step. Back.” Leo’s voice was strong. Determined. He stepped up to Paxton’s mother with eyes full of fire.
Lilith returned the look, fingers recoiling back to herself. She glanced at her wounded sons who stood behind.
She tsked and then smiled.
“I see…”
She looked at Paxton, stari…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Lilith
These men….
Boys, rather…
They had no regard for her. She could tell that already.
But they held her youngest in their midst.
And she needed him.
No…
Wanted him.
He’d killed one of her boys….
Destroyed her honor….her dignity.
Ruined her plans.
Him and that….
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Edric
A man was headed straight for him. Dagger at ready.
Edric prepared himself, ready, a twisted smile on his face.
“Enough!”
A voice rung through the halls. Calm, yet commanding. It carried a lilt to it and a power that none could deny, sending a chill through the air.…[Read more]
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