@elishavet-pidyon
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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NEXT SECTION
It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@rae @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @raxforge @calyhuge
For those who read my Scars story during the 1st contest, here’s a picture of the characters!!!! Pardon me if you never read it…I tagged everyone who participated in that contest.
All the drawing skills/credit goes to my younger sister, Christiana. I simply directed her on…[Read more]
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I feel like those two are going to get into trouble
XD Yeah probably, despite Brea’s best efforts
What does Victor look like again?
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Whalekeeper replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I’m gonna start putting my characters locations by their names so I can keep track. No one else has to do it, I just personally like doing it.
@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper
new character :]
Brea Thorne, the libraryÂ
Brea walked proudly past the shelves and tables, carrying her algebra textbook which was nearly the same size as her. Today sh…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Are any of you people planning on entering the contest????
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Loopylin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
We’ve already deviated so much from the main tone of the roleplay by killing an agent and leaving school campus.
I was secretly hoping we could get back to the school soon. XD We can’t extend the universe this much, it’s just too much of a stretch for the rest of the writers who participate on here. Aaaand Barnes is supposed to be g…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Leo
Here we are. The apartment rose up on the right just as the lorry slowed down. Leo came to his feet with the rolling stop, one hand on the back wall to steady himself. He scooped Quincy back up into his shoulder and reached for Silvia. “Come on, Sis.”
They shuffled down the aisle and out the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
Oh boy, get ready Y’all.
NEXT SECTION
Three days passed. The girl was soon up and well, with only a slight cough and sore throat to remind her of the cold. The rest of the alley children were starting to relax in their new home. Their eyes lost the ha…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Okay, I’m here. I’ll have an RP in a minute.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@koshka    @elishavet-pidyon     @whalekeeper
(Now would be a good time for Leo to show up.)
Agents
215 glanced over at his companion. Sure, they were trained killers, but they were a little out of practice. After years of heading interrogations and sending people like Rory to do the dirty work, they were not so eager to risk their ow…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon
I think she is probably just going to stick with it until Rory stops running. Sorry, she’s had to chase too many running people before and doesn’t let them go. XD
Barnes
Barnes recovered herself just in time to see Rory running towards the church building, knife in hand. Behind him, in the dar…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Yess!!!! Please participate! I’d love to have my favorite-KPer-to-snowball participate! Especially if we’re on the same team. You write a LOT.
@help-I’m-out-of-tags
Sure thing! @power @raxforge @trailblazer @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @keilah-h @jonas
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Oh shoot.
why are you doing this to him?!?!?!
I really want him to stop and see if Barnes is okay, but knowing Rory he’s not going to at this moment.
(Sometimes I hate my characters.)
I haven’t decided where Rory is because I was waiting to play off of Barnes’ reaction.
lol. Nope. But he’s still…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Is this still a thing? Will I need to snowball you?
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Loopylin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Sometimes we get inspiration from the strangest and most unassumingly powerful places. XD
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Loopylin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
So I figured there was still some kind of antagonistic threat (aka Agents). I implied it in this entry, but if Ellette doesn’t want to roll with it, we can figure something else out.
Barnes
He hit her chin, then her chest.
Barnes was surprised at the boy’s combat technique. So surprised, in fact, t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
So…where is Rory? I confused.
Leo
The pounding feet morphed into a gasping scuffle. Leo clenched his jaw, trying to sort out the sounds.
A muted voice. Mask lady? A door. A few footsteps. More sounds he didn’t want to identify. He grimaced.
A loud smack reverberated over the com unit, then m…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
*Moans*
Nooo, bring him back! What is he doing?!
@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper
Okay y’all, battle plan. Leo is going to be getting off at this next stop with Silvia and Quincy. Those two definitely have had all the violence/stress they can handle, so I’m sending them into the apartment (although Silvia is seriously…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
You just grabbed Rory?
In all this mess, no one has grabbed him yet. (no one that he doesn’t trust, that is)
This is not going to go well.
(btw, I couldn’t find a full physical description for Barns, but Rory is six-foot two, wiry, and incredibly strong.)
COOL! Another soldier boy! He and Rory will like…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @grcr @ellette-giselle @theducktator
Thanks, y’all💜💜💜
And yes, the quote references Aadelheide…I didn’t kill anyone else that’s special to Leon, I promise. (errr…that doesn’t mean that no one dies in Book 3 tho🫠 so far at least 1 person dies in all 3 books, so uhhhh…yeahhhhh)
I am concerned about this “broken i…
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