@elishavet-pidyon
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
The hours passed, but there was little dread in them for Joseph. Beric slept most of the time, and when Joseph laid a hand against the boy’s forehead, he found it was still hot with fever. His own eyes burned, and he was sure Stephen was little better.
Afte…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
well, it’s 2025, but I have one section left to post, so I think I kinda did it….. in a kinda didn’t way. lolololol.
Keep an eye out as I shall be posting THE END of TVON today!
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hybridlore replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Aww, your relationship with your brother sounds so sweet.
Same—we played with our stuffed animals too. We had maybe thirty of them between us, and they all belonged to a “pack” with an alpha, and a beta, etc. (Me and my sister were Erin Hunter fans.) We acted out whole storylines—probably enough to fill a novel xD.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/31/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The next morning, Joseph was startled awake by the sound of keys jangling in the lock. He sat up quickly, jolting Amelia awake.
Beric rolled over and yawned.
At the other side of the room, David was a…
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whaley replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @mineralizedwritings @rae @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @liberty @hybridlore @calyhuge @smiley @raxforge @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle
I’m shooting blind, here. No idea who likes these books.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I like how this is going. I will be furious if you kill them, but also… I really like these scenes. The dungeons plus the hope that the Allied Armies will come in time is a great mix. I want to read more because I really don’t know which way it will go.
Thank you! I’m so glad you are enjoying the mix and the suspense is bui…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/30/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(it’s loonnnggggeee)
“Would you pass the bread?” Stephen asked.
Joseph handed it to him, and Stephen cut a slice. “Amelia, this is truly an amazing supper.”
“It sure is,” Joseph agreed.
Amelia smiled…
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@power @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity
Some people…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/28/24
Section 1.
(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉
if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else
Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅
a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
We’ll see if this works, but I have decided randomly and impulsively that I will have this whole book posted on here by the end of the year.
Expect big sections in the time to come.
However, if I’m going to get this done it means that those of y’all who d…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, Joseph, Amelia, and Beric bade farewell to the orphanage. Noah had spoken with one of the men in the church, and he offered to give the Conway’s a ride in his cart since Beric was still recovering from his injured leg.…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@linus-smallprint @stephie @liberty @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @mineralizedwritings @grcr
Here’s the movie balled. Oh the music! It was amazing!!!
This is a story I can stand behind concerning women fighting. She fought when she was defending women and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@linus-smallprint @stephie @liberty @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @mineralizedwritings @grcr
HAS ANYONE SEEN THIS!!!!!????
It was amazing!!!! I saw it in theaters with friends and am now trying to scrape together the money to take my family! It was AMAZIN…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Brea (the library)
“Pre Algebra. I wanted to skip a grade or two, but my parents made me stay in fifth. Apparently I don’t ‘spend enough time with kids my age’. But at least they’re letting me do advanced math.”
She looked down at her book and saw Benny waving up at her from between equations. She rolled her eyes and turned t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Brea
Brea accepted the help up. The boy’s hand looked and felt weird, but Brea was enough of a lady to know not to point out people’s physical oddities.
She sniffed a couple times and pushed her hair out of her face.
“I’m fine, thanks.”
She scowled down at the ground, feeling the torn knee of her tights. At least it was hi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Has black curls(cropped short so it’s just very tumbly hair), black/brown eyes, and a lighter olive complexion. Is about average height for a 16 year old and on the thin side.
Ah… handsome boy. Whaley likey. 😏
…So you’re interested in making it to the school to make dance arrangements? I was under the i…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Thank you for the useful and fun rant. XD I appreciate it.
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Thank you! I wanted a Tim Burton kind of look, and I think it looks similar.
Ah, I like the expression and pose, especially with the clothing folds to sell the pose.
The floatiness of her hair is fantastic. :]
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