Elishavet Elroi

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I have a question for anyone who’s read the section I posted yesterday.

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I’m one of the nerd who wants people to think he’s cool, so I use Crossway’s Elect Standard Version.

I wounder what the Bee would do with the LSB. Maybe Lazy Scholar’s Bible? (Since the translators were so lazy they didn’t even bother to translate some words from Greek/Hebrew to English)

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NEXT SECTION!!!

The next morning, both young men were extremely tired. They ate a light breakfast, but neither of them felt like getting up and walking again. Leon decided to lay down and doze for another hour or so, and Julian pulled out the book from J…

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I liked how you had Neveah try to combat the lie, and it’s obvious it’s for Sef’s sake, not her own. To make this sequence really work, maybe make Sef think her Mani is just trying to save herself – it’s not a lie about Sef, but it would make the former lie hit home. Make her really crumble since the last thing keeping the lie f…

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wowww…that’s a lot to think about and really helpful!!! Thank you!

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Lol. Leon is more experienced than Julian. J will level out, he’s just excited and nervous and high strung and…. you get the point.

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WHY would ANYONE in his right mind Say That?

It’s Julian who needs this speech. Go ask him.

He’s a little hot headed, he’s a firebrand, and he’s desperately excited to share the truth with his people.

 

Anyway, you probably do all that in this book, and I am really enjoying reading this. So far cultures are fascinating and the…

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YES those are what I’m looking for!!!!
I will definitely be using those later in my book…

But I’m struggling with a specific scene where I need a lie XDXD and none of these seem to fit…

“Well, what are you waiting for?” the Master spat, motioning for Iver to continue. “You may begin whenever you are ready.”

Sef’s knees sho…

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NEXT SECTION! 2

It was after sunset, and Julian and Leon were walking alone in the dim light. “So, how should we go about this?” Julian asked.

“I say the same as we did when on the run in Ardenta. We’ll try to get a place to sleep with a family, shar…

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NEXT SECTION!

(In case anyone hasn’t noticed, I’m starting out small because this is the beginning after all. I think the sections will get bigger soon, and I’ll also maybe post some more today.)

Julian sat down on a rock by the path and drew in several dee…

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Ooooh tasty art. *Nom nom nom* And watercolors are the perfect medium for such a character! Job very well done, I must say!!

*Bored because I’m stuck in bed* *Scrolls KP*

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Ooh pretty, and I like the name Letice. It’s very unique.

@koshka

11 pm is late? Gracious, I must be an insomniac or something. I’m doing good to be down by 12. Now my usual get up time is between 7:00 – 8:00 depending on the day, so I suppose if you’re an early riser it makes…

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Oooo! I love her!!! You have such a good touch when it comes to aesthetics!

Haha, the book I just tagged you two on is certainly a glorifying God in dark topics………….

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*Distant sobbing*

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Just a heads up, for anyone who has not read previous warnings….. the series takes a rather dark turn from here, because of the culture my characters are stepping into. I’m not going to have darkness to be dark, violence to be violent, etc. But darkness an…[Read more]

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FIRST section!

Land of Shadows
The Flames of Hope Saga
Book 3

 
The people who walked in darkness
have seen a great light;
those who dwelt in a land of shadows,
on them has light shone.
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