Jaybird

Thanks so much for the tips everyone. They are all helpful. I just realized I forgot to mention anything about the prison or the escape. Might have been helpful…
So my two girl characters Kedja and Zyla are trying to escape a prison that they’ve been brought to to be trained to work for Okdor, my Villain. Kedja, through a very tragic back…[Read more]

@faith-q

Well… I’d say everyone else here has given great answers.

I’d say the same thing. With your characters actions if he messes up be sure to portray the wrong as wrong.

Again with the government and any authority we are commanded to obey them unless it goes against the Bible. And when we can’t obey still do it respectfully. Like @elishavet…[Read more]

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Okay. I’m going back to the gym now. This was way too much nerdy book stuff for one day.

IT’S LEG DAY BABY LEZZ GOOOO!

@elishavet-pidyon I didn’t comment on it, sorry.

@elishavet-pidyon Okay, cool. It’s really good!

@elishavet-pidyon I love it! Is that the end or are you planning to write more?

@elishavet-pidyon Great! I think you can just copy the link and post it here? I don’t have much experience with Google docs yet, but I think there’s a share button in the corner.

@elishavet-pidyon Could you put it on here once you’re done? If you don’t want to that’s all right.

@elishavet-pidyon XD Makes sense. I joined the Kingdom a little after I started writing so it really has been a long time.

@elishavet-pidyon About six years at this point. I’m old, haha.

@elishavet-pidyon Nice, nice. I’m looking forward to seeing how you grow!

@elishavet-pidyon I’ve finished first drafts of loads of things, but haven’t really gotten around into the editing phases, so I don’t know if I can exactly call it finished, haha. How long have you been writing?

@elishavet-pidyon Is this your first book?

@elishavet-pidyon *deadpan eyes* To find a job.

Oo, Alyona sounds awesome! And I’m glad you’re able to know what themes you’re going to express; I never seem to know what my themes are, even after I’m long done with something. I suppose I’ll have to ask an English teacher one day…

@elishavet-pidyon Ah, main characters are always a struggle for me too. I tend to develop them as I’m writing, so I don’t tend to know who they are until I start.

Yeah, I’m really busy right now too with school. School makes everything rough.

@elishavet-pidyon What about you? What are you currently working on?

@elishavet-pidyon

*Gasps and tentatively waves a paw at your disappearing form.*

Good day to you too, mysterious human. Pleased to see you around.

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@elishavet-pidyon I’ll do this for my current WIP so I can better write it. Thanks for asking me stuff!

My main character is Joey Garcia, a 24 year old worker at a store. I think his struggle throughout the book is to find reason to do something as well as how best to convince someone to give himself up. He’ll probably accomplish both of these…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Beautiful poetry.

Oh that’s cool. I don’t know how I haven’t heard about him before. I can hear my sister’s best friend lecturing me now…

He sounds like the kind of person a lot of people would quote, and I can see Andrew Peterson’s inspiration coming from him.