Jaybird

@elishavet-pidyon

Ooh, neat! I have a culture that avoids living on land, too, with more Maori and Hawaiian influence on the language and some Viking inspiration planned for their culture (and their hair, because Viking braids are epic).

That does sound like fun! (I get that. XD I am the queen of cursory Google searches… or else hours-long…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Ooh, neat! I have a culture that avoids living on land, too, with more Maori and Hawaiian influence on the language and some Viking inspiration planned for their culture (and their hair, because Viking braids are epic).

That does sound like fun! (I get that. XD I am the queen of cursory Google searches… or else hours-long…[Read more]

Here’s a list I made to keep track (definitely not weird)

Protagonist Antagonist

@emilysf =Zoe and Sofia

@godlyfantasy12 =November, Ara, Lyn, Nyx, and Corvina

@elishavet-pidyon =Viktor and Ocran

@koshka =Zlatan and Vulkasin

@denali-christianson = Kilied and Balorico

If I lost someone please correct me!

@elishavet-pidyon SOUNDS GOOD XD

Jocelyn & Nyx

”Friendly?”

”Doesn’t sound very friendly.” Nyx huffed, turning up his nose and giving it a twitch. Lyn shrugged. She waved enthusiastically to the stranger; an adult, who was glaring at the two in shock and confusion. He also seemed to be appalled by their presence.

As though by entering t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon u wanna introduce ocran to Jocelyn or u want me to?

@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

By the way, whoever I mention first is the actual point of view for a section.

Vulkasin and Zlatan.

Door after door brought nothing in reward, and by the second corridor Vulkasin was sure they were headed higher into the castle, not down to some courtyard.

He was about to suggest they turn around when Ara’s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon oh I did make a Jocelyn scene btw but u may have missed it lol! Looks like we submitted at the same time but they kinda coincide well sooo yea!

@elishavet-pidyon I think I’m gonna have Jocelyn and Nyx run into Ocran and then maybe they be like OKIE BAI if they realize he’s bad or something lol

Jocelyn & Nyx

“Hey, check it out! Light that isn’t from candles!” Lyn pointed to one of the windows beside her.

The duo had been climbing a spiral staircase for a while before ever reaching…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon cuz we can always defeat him and yeet him out of the castle XD

maybe he doesn’t own it, but he found it and was like “OH HEY FREE STRONGHOLD!! YA KNOW XD

@elishavet-pidyon

OOH I LOVE THIS IDEA where it’s actually like “his” castle kind, but like he’s using it as a stronghold and he hasn’t just “appeared there” so ye…that’s awesome cuz we kinda needed someone for the brothers to fight ROFL

@elishavet-pidyon poor Viktor XD

@koshka

ALRIGHTY SO LETS GET THIS SHOW ON THE ROAD!!!

….SOMEHOW 🤣

Arabella & November

They’d been walking for a while, opening different doors only to reveal more hallways, or various rooms that didn’t seem to get them any closer to their destination: outside. November hoped the brothers weren’t getting…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

BONIFER SQUOON SHRIEK…..*throws stuff against the wall and throws tantrum!!!*

I. LOATHE. HIM.

I how can he be LESS NICE?!?! Bonfire squoon is a sick monster….

ahem….anyway….those books crushed my soul, ignore my rant.

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

SO, meet…Corvina. My dear sarcastic girl.  She is 16, has Raven black hair, blue-grey eyes, wears black, (btw all my female characters wear skirts and dresses XD) and a black cape. Also, she’s a Shifter. A human with the ability to transform into an animal.

she can transform into a Raven.

She also has some limi…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Oh….mine is definitely fun….😏

Althought she definitely has those moments where she goes mad and ur like “OH U POOR TORMENTED THING” and then she goes back to her sarcastic little pessimistic self.

I just dunno if she can hold over a huge plot against everyone on her own. See her role in the books is mainly she works f…[Read more]

@koshka ROFL I feel that.

HERRRMMM.

OK @denali-christianson whenever u come back

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

yall….someone needs to introduce a villain eventually….because at some point we’re all gonna find each other and…then what??

Also @denali-christianson can u tell us kinda a few things they do on story embers? I went and looked but…the…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

This is the reputation I strive for. XD

@elishavet-pidyon

That’s neat! I’m also intrigued by the Nordic/Slavic inspiration of your world; those are really cool cultures to draw from!

@elishavet-pidyon more charries is always fun! And more girls would be cool, XD Although guys are my favorite XD #fangirl ROFL

@denali-christianson @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @EVERYONE XD

HEEEY So…quick question…would it be too late to say…change a little bit about the timeline of where my charries were before they got to the castle? So instead of A’Grend they’d be in a different place? That way waaaay later down the road maybe I could introduce another character?…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

THX! Yes I love November XD

@elishavet-pidyon

Yes! You illustrated my point perfectly. Delving into the core of the theme (such as Good Vs Evil) through questions demonstrated throughout the book, opens up many different but related themes that expands on the original theme’s message.

Themes are really cool in that way. I really like how you explained it in your post!