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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
NOOOO RIKER!!!!!!!
November
Blood.
Riker was bleeding.
November’s stomach churned at the sight and he paled. He took a step back as Viktor and Mikkel rushed forward.
Riker’s eyelids flitted open and shut, and November frowned.
He once again felt useless. But what could he do? Hop…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Arabella
No…no! This..this wasn’t right!
Her eyes watered as Ezra led her away. She could hear Naja crying beside her, followed by a whimpering Jareth.
The sounds broke her heart.
Once they’d reached a certain point, Ezra released her. She’d expected herself to bolt. To run back toward t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Good job! As its only first draft, I swap out all ‘w’s and ‘th’s as they aren’t a sound in Russian.
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Was the man crazy?!
No, he was an officer, just like Zlatan himself. First in attack last in retreat. In better circumstances two officers would both give all the information…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
RIKER!!! NO THEY WILL NOT!!! 😭😭
Nyx
Someone was holding him. Close.
”Stay with me, darling.” The voice cooed.
Lyn…?
It didn’t sound like Lyn…didn’t smell like her either.
But….whoever it was didn’t smell dangerous either.
They smelled…sweet. Like chocolate…
Nyx’s ears bent. Why was ev…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Nyx
Nyx’s senses were on high alert from moment one.
He’d smelled the dogs and guards before they ever entered. Sadly, he hadn’t had time to warn anyone. They were on them in a matter of seconds.
Nyx had leapt at the first thing to enter the door; one of the dogs.
It was much bigger then…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Jocelyn
It had taken Lyn only seconds to realize Nyx wasn’t with her.
She’d been pushed out the door by someone; she wasn’t sure who. But as she climbed the stairs behind Alyona, she had realized with a terrible start that the usual ball of fluff around her neck was nowhere to be found…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
ZlatanThe bay of a war dog. One small mark on time. Instant chaos in the ranks.
Hateful chaos and disorder.
The Desanik in Zlatan took over.
The tower door had been cleared, their paths somehow traced. By the sound at least half a dozen guards were already inside.
No time left.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon also I figure Jocelyn is one of the ones u pushed out the door (which is why she left Nyx) cuz they’d never leave each other otherwise. So once Alyona has a POV I’ll make Lyn one, just so I know what’s going on outside XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon AWESOME!! I am READY AND RARING TO GO!!!! XD!!! @koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Arabella
Someone had grabbed her just as the chaos ensued. It was an attack like Ara had never witnessed, and she was unprepared for it.
She gasped, her hands shaking against the stone floor as she rolled to her side, trying to catch sight of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon u on?? If so u wanna RP? @koshka @keilah-h what do y’all think of the teams? @freedomwriter76
yall wanna start getting ready for guards to attack?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 also on our RP I believe it’s @elishavet-pidyon turn….but don’t like hold me to that I could be wrong XD. All I know is I’ve made quite a couple….
also yall….
is this the point where we start thinking about getting split up?
im thinking something happens…a conflict??
Maybe Ocran’s guards or somet…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon Thank you guys!! <3 Pretty much what happened is Payton is having an attitude towards Nathan….XDXD
*sorry Nathan*
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Queen_of_Alvastia started the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @drawing a blank *sorry guys* *sigh* @anyone-else-reading-this
Thoughts? Changes? Edits? XD
Payton sent one of his pieces of kindling rolling towards Nathan with a well-aimed kick.
“So,” he drawled with a careless attitude, “You think you can fool us all by starting to help out now t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP; a character is running away with the pen!! in the forum Characters 4 years ago
Oooh this sounds so incredible first off!! You’ve already done AMAZING stuff so far!! Ugh 😭!
So, honestly it’s a little hard for me to actually give advice BUT I can say that I have a character very similar to this in my own series.
She’s not a mother, or “abusive” or even an adult for the first part of the series.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years ago
SOOO apparently this is where you go for stubborn scenes lol!!
AND I know I’ve already posted a question for help with an injury, well I’ve kinda gotten some help online with that so…but anymore help in that thread I’d appreciate as well, also feel free to ask ur own questions and such.
ANYWAY!! I am rlly trying to write because it’s be…[Read more]
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Lydia S. started the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Hey, ya’ll!
Lydia, here. 🙂 So, I thought it’d be fun to start an inspiration exchange thread!
This is a place where we can all dump interesting photos or dialog prompts we happen to find or come up with, and it’s also somewhere where we can resort to if we need inspiration! Post as many prompts/pictures as you’d like, but please make sure they…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
HEYO!!! Wasn’t sure where to put this thread XD But I need some advice with writing an injury infliction scene!! (I’m also gonna use my pal google, but thought u guys might could help out too!)
SO! I am working on my draft of book 1 of my series, and in it, my female MC (Arabella’s) All Is Lost moment is when my male MC (November) is injured by…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Oh, by the way, Jareth can talk to Crow sorta the way Jocelyn can talk to Nyx, but it’s not telepathic. Also, Crow doesn’t have feathers, he has spikes and scales. The drawing says “As drawn by Feather” because that’s the name of the character who drew it in the story (she’s Jareth’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Everyone seemed to notice Franz’s sudden change of behavior when Naja entered the room. How he didn’t seem quite as gruff as before. How he acted so differently with her compared to how he had with….Well…
Everyone else.
It was….strange….
And November didn’t fully grasp it.
Per…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Loud voices. The beginning of an argument. Shuffling feet on cold stone.
The barrack…
Something was digging into his side. Vulkasin tried rolling over, but the thing followed his movement. He finally forced open one eye.
The cross piece and pommel on his sword.
Why did I…[Read more]
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