@elishavet-pidyon
Active 5 hours, 14 minutes ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
- Total Posts: 1891
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
November
November paled and he felt his heart drop into his stomach.
Mikkel want him to help? The boy who couldn’t do anything right? The boy who, at the mere sight of blood, nearly lost his lunch?
“It’s alright. Just talk to him.” Mikkel smiled, obviously noting November’s grim expressio…[Read more]
-
Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
“Is November okay?” Riker paused, moaned. “Am I supposed to be…is it nighttime already?”
The blood drained from Mikkel’s face, but he lifted a hand. “How many fingers and I holding up?”
Riker blinked, squinted. “Three?”
Mikkel dropped his hand, mild relief bring ing back some color…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
November
Amidst his panicking thoughts, November reached a point where he thought he might vomit.
Until he heard his name.
It was Riker.
He was…checking on him.
Despite his own injury.
November stared in awe, a lump forming in his throat. He blinked, tears sprouting from his e…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Nyx“What’s wrong, darling?” Eva’s voice was soothing, but Nyx felt himself grow a bit agitated.
Why did she keep calling him that?!
Only Lyn could call him that! And she was not Lyn! Where was Lyn!
He shut his eyes, turning his head away as his paw jostled slightly. He let out a hiss of…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Jocelyn
”Vat now?”
Jocelyn stared at their small group.
”Really?!” Franz gruffed. “You’re asking a bunch of children?”
Alyona winced slightly. Lyn scrunched her nose.
Ignoring him entirely, she turned to Alyona, “Any ideas where your brother would go after everything dies down? You know…[Read more]
-
Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
His sword was messy now, but he didn’t stop to clean it even though the sounds of pursuit had died to a patter.
Let the rest to have made it to safety.
Zlatan kept climbing stairs, checking rooms. Two levels. Three.
Vulkasin
Lyn and Altona stared at him, worry plain on their…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon YAYAY UR HERE!!!
-
Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
Riker was fading, something more than just a scraped up forehead was to blame.
“Hey!” Mikkel lightly slapped him. “Stay with me.”
Riker blinked, his eyes hazey and dilated. Probably slightly concussed.
Great. Oswald, what do I do?
Oswald’s gone.
Mikkel dragged in a breath, shoving…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone on and wanna RP? Cuz I wanna RP some more XD
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
NOOOO RIKER!!!!!!!
November
Blood.
Riker was bleeding.
November’s stomach churned at the sight and he paled. He took a step back as Viktor and Mikkel rushed forward.
Riker’s eyelids flitted open and shut, and November frowned.
He once again felt useless. But what could he do? Hop…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Arabella
No…no! This..this wasn’t right!
Her eyes watered as Ezra led her away. She could hear Naja crying beside her, followed by a whimpering Jareth.
The sounds broke her heart.
Once they’d reached a certain point, Ezra released her. She’d expected herself to bolt. To run back toward t…[Read more]
-
Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Good job! As its only first draft, I swap out all ‘w’s and ‘th’s as they aren’t a sound in Russian.
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Was the man crazy?!
No, he was an officer, just like Zlatan himself. First in attack last in retreat. In better circumstances two officers would both give all the information…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
RIKER!!! NO THEY WILL NOT!!! 😭😭
Nyx
Someone was holding him. Close.
”Stay with me, darling.” The voice cooed.
Lyn…?
It didn’t sound like Lyn…didn’t smell like her either.
But….whoever it was didn’t smell dangerous either.
They smelled…sweet. Like chocolate…
Nyx’s ears bent. Why was ev…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Nyx
Nyx’s senses were on high alert from moment one.
He’d smelled the dogs and guards before they ever entered. Sadly, he hadn’t had time to warn anyone. They were on them in a matter of seconds.
Nyx had leapt at the first thing to enter the door; one of the dogs.
It was much bigger then…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Jocelyn
It had taken Lyn only seconds to realize Nyx wasn’t with her.
She’d been pushed out the door by someone; she wasn’t sure who. But as she climbed the stairs behind Alyona, she had realized with a terrible start that the usual ball of fluff around her neck was nowhere to be found…[Read more]
-
Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
ZlatanThe bay of a war dog. One small mark on time. Instant chaos in the ranks.
Hateful chaos and disorder.
The Desanik in Zlatan took over.
The tower door had been cleared, their paths somehow traced. By the sound at least half a dozen guards were already inside.
No time left.…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon also I figure Jocelyn is one of the ones u pushed out the door (which is why she left Nyx) cuz they’d never leave each other otherwise. So once Alyona has a POV I’ll make Lyn one, just so I know what’s going on outside XD
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AWESOME!! I am READY AND RARING TO GO!!!! XD!!! @koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Arabella
Someone had grabbed her just as the chaos ensued. It was an attack like Ara had never witnessed, and she was unprepared for it.
She gasped, her hands shaking against the stone floor as she rolled to her side, trying to catch sight of…[Read more]
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon u on?? If so u wanna RP? @koshka @keilah-h what do y’all think of the teams? @freedomwriter76
yall wanna start getting ready for guards to attack?
-
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 also on our RP I believe it’s @elishavet-pidyon turn….but don’t like hold me to that I could be wrong XD. All I know is I’ve made quite a couple….
also yall….
is this the point where we start thinking about getting split up?
im thinking something happens…a conflict??
Maybe Ocran’s guards or somet…[Read more]
- Load More
