@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Paxton
“Do you have any friends?” Jakob’s voice echoed through the halls. “Oh, but you don’t have to talk about if you don’t want to.”
Paxton gripped Wolfgang’s hand, considering it. There were…quite a few now…
Before…he hadn’t had any friends…
Now…he had many…
But to try and talk about them all s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
“I’ll say…” Nyx mused, eyes flashing in the dim light. “Place needs a remodel, that’s for sure,” he let out a disgusted growl as he flicked something away from the stone floor nearby.
The brothers chuckles. Grimm let out a breath of a laugh as well, shaking his head.
“I think we have more impo…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Nyx looked miffed, like a kid told no.
At least everyone here seemed to have a sense of humor, even if slightly disfunctional. He grinned and seated himself cross legged and leaned against the wall, hands clasped behind his head.
Zlatan
He eased himself to the floor, grateful for…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHH I LOVE THAT OH MY WORD!!!!
Paxton
The brothers were…laughing now.
Obviously playing some sort of game, though Paxton wasn’t entirely sure what they were speaking…
It sounded a bit like nonsense to him. But their laughter was infectious, and it made him relax if at least a little.
His eyes…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ok, I think I’m keeping Crosshair and Feather because now that I’ve seen Grimm, I kinda wonder how he’d get along with my characters. Rinzler will also come back, because I’m thinking of adding his sister later. But he won’t be as active. Jareth and Crow go back, because I’m planning…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Nyx
Vulkasin’s laughter rang through the halls. Nyx’s ears twitched. He glanced at the light-haired brother, who was now bent over in mirth, eyes teary.
“Ah me! Of all odds.. To be stuck…with two of you!”
Nyx grinned, sniggering. Grimm shot him a pointed glare, which made him only snicker more. The…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Did any book influence your current WIP? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
And just because I’m curious, how would you do that? I mean, in what way does this spiritual layer work into your setting and story? I’m just curious, so if it’s a dreadful spoiler or something don’t worry about answering.
Ok so… I really don’t know. I want the beauty of nature as God’s creation to play a important role. T…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Grimm!!!! *Sob*
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Zlatan
“We’re stopping, and you are going to rest,” Grimm stared at him. “But if you have a problem with that, you’re free to go your own way.”
Vulkasin laughed. And kept laughing till he sank helplessly to the floor. Great. Zlatan cut his eyes at his brother, but he couldn’t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I KNOW!!!!
Paxton
He couldn’t stop the tears coming from his eyes now, all he could do was hide them in the fur of his bear.
He glanced up and, with blurred vision, could see that the others were crying too.
Reuben was watching with soft, tear-stained eyes. He wiped them away.
Leo whispered g…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka UGH ZLATAN!!! Okay, Zlatan is srsly gonna be getting to Grimm now….
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Zlatan had the look of determination in his eyes. Refusal to accept the help of others.
But more then that…
His words…the pain in his features, displayed more then just a physical issue.
It showed a guilt that Grimm knew first…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
At last. Someone to make Zlati slow down for a moment.
But his brother had that quirk in his brow which said he was thinking. Analyzing.
“I’m a Desanik. I’ll be fine.” He gave the edge of his cloak a jerk. “But if you vant to stop a moment…V’e do need to know v’hat happened to…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Arabella
“…Would any of you young ladies know where we might be?” Vince asked, eyes kind as he looked around.
“I’m afraid we’re also at a loss…” Cécile looked around at the surroundings.
“Well, lucky for you, we know exactly where we are!” Jocelyn grinned, voice exuberant.
Ara let out a small laug…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon afraid so….
@freedomwriter76 I’m glad u decided to keep future Riker and Leon XD!! I really love them lol!! @koshka
Paxton
“…Your brothers…they hurt you…didn’t they?”
Paxton fingered the crystal around Hope’s neck, squeezing his legs together. His stomach twisted and flipped at the memories.
(hey so In this Paxton does…
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Microphage6032 posted an update 3 years, 9 months ago
Y’ALL IT HAPPENED!!!
I’m no longer a Bumbling Henchmen…
I am now a CHARISMATIC REBEL!!! Woo-Hoo!
@freedomwriter76 @ava-blue @queen_of_alvastia @lydia-s @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @anatra23 @starshiness @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka AWWW ZLATAN UR NOT A WEAKLING!!! @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
His eyes scanned Zlatan. The man was definitely in pain. He could tell.
He’d worn the look that Zlatan had painted on his face many times, hiding the injuries he held. The pain inside, wether physical or no.
And…he’d seen it on others too.
Back in the rebel…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
He carefully set aside the strangeness of what had just happened. They needed to move, to find whoever was responsible for turning Nyx into a mad creature.
But to do that, they’d need speed. Zatan sucked in a breath and leaned against the wall for a moment. Mentally, he gathered up all…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I’m trying to decide if I should go ahead and write a Corvina RP…..I think so.
also what did u think of Edric and Aramis?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon thank u!! Also this is gonna be cool reading Alwin and William’s RPs!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka understandable!! Ah I love how Vulkasin describes it, and I love all of them!! @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
“Zat v’as amazing.”
Grimm glanced at the brothers. Zlatan was still frozen, eyeing Grimm with thin golden eyes, as if studying him.
Vulkasin just seemed in awe, his face beaming with curiosity and questions. Thoug…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
This is a little difficult to write, as the twins actually are wolves.
The Twins
Zlatan stood frozen to the wall, his eyes thinning to liquid gold slits.
Vulkasin clamped his mouth shut. How long had he been staring with it hanging like that? Ever since Grimm had done…well, whatever that wa…[Read more]
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