Jaybird

@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Are the twins coming?

Leo

“Later, people.” Feather boy twirled away in a swirl of rose and gold.

How did someone say goodbye here again? Leo smiled and raised his hand in a halfhearted wave.

Nobody looked horrified, so at least he didn’t do something wrong. On second thought, each of these kids looked lik…[Read more]

@whalekeeper
@loopylin @koshka @keilah-h

This is kinda depressingly dead. We had a good flow going!

@loopylin

Thank you!!

Yes, I love those books. But I don’t like the Royal Ranger (starting at book twelve and going onward.) He kinda ruined the story when he did that.

@linus-smallprint

okay, that makes sense!

ha!!! I write the first draft of LTBL in 2018!!
I win!!

@theducktator

That does make sense!!

WILL TREATY!!! Ranger’s Apprentice anyone?

@linus-smallprint

*shrug*

It was just a theory. Like Evaluation. Unproven.

@linus-smallprint

Wow… I know it is the job of authors to torcher their readers, but that is mean.

Oh, you have no idea what I’m capable of.

Yes, this is what I would like to see earlier. This shows a sense of longing.

Got it. Will go through and add.

This Empire is strict. I do not want to know what they would have done for COVID-19 r…

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@grcr

that’s an awesome picture!!

@theshadow

oh! Duh! 🙄

I can’t believe I forgot that!

noooo!! Totally disagree!! He turned out to be a horrible person!! He loses all my sympathy! Raoul is the BEST!! He was a real hero.

@keilah-h

That was Jonathan.

this is Joseph! Aaron’s little friend from Let There Be Light!

@elishavet-pidyon

ahhhh!!!! This is amazing!!!! 🤩

@freed_and_redeemed @sunny421 @loopylin

Fixed your tags…

*waits anxiously in the shadows*

@elishavet-pidyon

Where? Where are the opening scenes?

@linus-smallprint

I get the feeling that a lot of eldests are writers. In fact, I’ve only met one girl who was a writer and wasn’t an oldest sibling.

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h

Here’s the next section.

In the following days, Aaron let go of all hopes of returning home. He accepted the reality that this was his new home, and would be a place he would never leave. He committed his father and sister to the Lord, trusting Him to watch over and protect them.

It was hard, but Aaron…

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@linus-smallprint

Would you have been angry with him if he did leave her? lol.

I almost wrote a fake scene where he did, just to see how you would react. But I didn’t have time. XD

Hmm, I’ll think about that. I think that Aaron always had it in the back of his mind that this is temperary and he will go home. Only, now he can’t.

Did it not…[Read more]

@theducktator

Thanks! Got it!!