Jaybird

@highscribeofaetherium

Sorry, it didn’t tag you. Just read the post above for the details.

@power  @ellette-giselle  @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper  @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin [Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

And yes, Liberty, Hans hates Jews and is the main villain of my first novel (and other novels as well…he’s the main villain in several of my WW2 WIP ideas).

Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*

@power

Thanks! The story is actually my sister’s story, but I wrote it. It was a neat project to do with her! Thanks for judging…even though there wasn’t much to judge.

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I know. It’s busy this time of year.

@linus-smallprint

No, I’m concentrating on finishing my main WIP right now. Maybe in the new year I will p…

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@hybridlore

I signed up!!

Yay!!! Looking forward to seeing you there!

@loopylin

When is CWW?

Its website opens on January 6th. The official writing competition doesn’t start until the 7th. That gives an entire day for people to introduce themselves, get comfortable, and learn how everything works.

@power

It would amaze them when I write under 37 words the entire week. 😆

Wait…does that mean you wrote a ton last time and can’t write much right now? Or you wrote only that much last time and am planning on blowing the numbers away this time? Sorry, it’s not quite clear to me.

@calyhuge

Wow. What are you debating? Theology?

Okay, to all the other keepers joining CWW; I’ve joined. I also have no clue how interaction actually works with it, so I may not see you there.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad to hear that!

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@whalekeeper

Interesting concept to have arted.

@grcr

I like his cape thingy.

@whalekeeper

*Nods seriously*

Glad I could be of any service.

*Bows*

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@whalekeeper

huh. interesting.

I might have to look into that.

Thanks!!

@whalekeeper

is there a free version?

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It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…

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@liberty

I really like this picture!!! So good!

Congrats on the win!

I’m glad Power judged because I wouldn’t have been able to submit anything today. With Christmas right around the corner I’m swamped!