Jaybird

@hybridlore

btw, I’m surprised the protection squad isn’t out in full force yet.

I guess Koshka and Elishiavet are behind.

@hybridlore

Yes, I am interested in what he says. It may just be a girl thing to catch stuff like that and it might go right over his head.

@hybridlore

Okay, so I have a question. Would you have still called it if Amelia hadn’t brought up wanting a baby in the letter to Sabina?

Did you call it the whole time, or was there any point that you actually thought she was sick.

Should I cut out the baby part in the letter to make this scene more stressful, or no?

 

 

Oh boy… this is n…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Right. Ellette told me.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

 

12/28/24

Section 1.

 

(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉

if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.

 

NEXT SECTION

The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…

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@freed_and_redeemed

This is good! I like this scene!

Wait, hang on……. you got him stuck there and now you don’t know what to do?!?!

Haha…… I may or may not have done that to a character before………

 

Honestly, George doesn’t seem very stable at the moment, If Riker gets out of the room and George follows and trips over something…[Read more]

@liberty

Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*

I’m afraid not 😔

What @ellette-giselle said about him having several chances and accepting none of them is correct

@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else

 

Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅

 

a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]

ya’ll

 

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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

 

 

 

*Bwwwwwwwh* 🤧

 

 

 

Ya’ll,

 

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MY PET SNOWBALL RAN AWAY FROM HOME LAST NIGHT!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

 

*Bwwwwwwwh* 🤧

 

 

My precious snowball! Oh, how I loved that it. . .

I made sure it was nice and smooth, no rocks. I let it go outside and play. I even made it it’s own pair of jammies!

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S-sorry, I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

You’re very welcome.

Also, why does that racoon picture have an expression that so fits what I know of you? lolololol.

 

@linus-smallprint

 

I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

Thanks. It actually wasn’t in the first or second draft. I had a reference made to it in the third, but I thought I should flush it out into a full s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good!

I’ll see if I can get at least one of your new sections done today.

Wonderful!! Thanks! Looking forward to it!

@linus-smallprint

 

Also, what about Andrew Peterson’s Carry the Fire? We both agreed on that one.

Okay yeah, we did. That one is a great song.

 

Oh, looks like you mentioned the editor question. Ignore my second offer. I thought you might have missed it.Glad you found a good person for the job!

😉

 

 

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know how to send doc. links. so, here are my answers.

 

The Narrow Path Trilogy: Book One – The Cost Feedback Questions

 

Character

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Alan. Because he was the redemption character, and I LOVE redemption characters. If you look at my…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

My sister managed to get away with one-word answers for the questions I did for my first draft

lol. That sounds like my brother.

 

I’m on it. Give me one sec….

@liberty

 

one older brother

LUCKYYYYYYY!!!!! That’s why I like Phil so much. He’s my fictional older brother.

I’m the oldest with two younger brothers and a younger sister.

 

 

My friend actually had Summer of Suspense and lent it to me. I liked it so much I looked up the author to see if she wrote anything else, and then I discovered it was…[Read more]

@liberty

OH IT IS SO GOOD!

You must read it!

You won’t be able to put it down. It is stressful!!!

(Peder is my favorite character by the way.)

@liberty

No! I’ve never been to Highland games. That sounds AMAZING!

Have you?

 

My dad has the German. Our last name is actually German, and I look very German, though my brothers take after the highlander and irish side.

@hybridlore

Mainly just feedback. I have an actually editor who can catch typos, but if you see anything then you can mention it.

 

I hope Amelia doesn’t die.

Oh dear.

 

That would be an interesting twist—if everyone thinks she’s going to have the plague, but then she really ends up having a baby. But we shall see.

Hmm, it would be.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was just talking about your Scottish heritage with Joy, one of my older sisters, and she wanted to know if you go to any Highland Games.

Do you?

By the way, your clan motto is amazing! It’s so cool that they were Covenanters. We can’t say that for our clan. Though we know there were some Sutherland covenanters, the majority…[Read more]