Jaybird

@folith-feolin @theducktator @rae @koshka

Thank y’all for all of your thoughts! They were IMMENSELY helpful!! (and I realized something about Frida {the stepmother} today that I didn’t realize before…let’s just say she deserves the nickname “Evil Lady” even more now😭😡 poor Felix *sobs*)

and with that, I will be changing Felix a bit (mostly…[Read more]

@rae

I’ll be praying as well! 💕🙏

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm, that is a bit of a pickle.

Perhaps he was originally just afraid of (and a little bit for) Adinah. He didn’t hate them at first (that’s not something that happens overnight). He kept the boyd because, at the root, he did at first still love Adinah (and them) and vaguely wanted to keep them safe.

Also, he doesn’t have to…[Read more]

@rae just prayed and will continue to do so! 💖💖

@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @theducktator @rae @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-pls-helpppppppp-XD

Ok, so I have a bit of a plot hole.

For those of y’all who don’t know, I have five characters (all of whom are MC’s in their own novel) who I have…[Read more]

@theducktator *offers tissues* I teared up too😭

@koshka Uhmmmmm SPOILERS XD

@keilah-h and still koshka

I’m so glad y’all like it so far!!

I make no promises that any specific person will survive, although I don’t think I could kill Matthias…I have become too attached already😂 It happened so fast💖

nor do I think I could part with…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Strangled noises*

…

Please don’t kill Moishe. It may be a pretty amazing wrapup if Mathias is killed (not that you are planning to do that, I’m just a fellow writer{rather concerned btw over those choices[does he go to a camp?(If he does, is it the one Riker is stationed at?)]}), but please…that would just be…[Read more]

@esther-c @keilah-h @koshka

I have more of Matthias (and others!!)

A scene (although there may be more at the beginning of it) and a snippet of the next scene (although there would be a POV scene from the 2nd MC between these two scenes, of course) that I wanted to share!!!

here it is!!!

and I officially love Moishe even more❤️😭💖

“I was v…

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@theducktator

Yes I am!! Thanks for reminding me. I’ll post the next one(s) sometime tomorrow. I’ve just been getting so distracted and I’ve forgotten! 😭

@highscribeofaetherium

Ok I will 😂 I want to start brainstorming it this afternoon (since it won’t be anything longer than a novella) but I’m not sure if I’ll get to it or not.

@trailblazer

Ooh, I like that idea!! This is definitely still in the plot bunny stage, so any ideas are welcome. XD

Sooo… I just came up with a possible novel/novella/short story idea that I really want to write… Basically, this person, probably a girl, is told that she is the chosen one, or something like that, but she refuses. She doesn’t want to get involved with this at all. So the special responsibilities/quest/privileges are given to someone else, prefe…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I love this scene!

Welllll, you already know I like Matthias. 😛 But I think I have to agree with you—I like Moishe too. I get the vibe that he has a layered backstory, more than he might be willing to share… 🤔

OH, and I still need to decide which fate Matthias ends up choosing (because his father gives him two options)…

although if Matthias chose the second option, I could connect his novel to some of my other novels.

hmmmmmmm

RANT TIME (lol)

@esther-c @koshka @keilah-h

Soooooo, this novel with Matthias has a second MC (Stefan Nolan Nachtnebel) who will likely be a low-rank soldier in the Heer (regular German army; the entire military of Nazi Germany was called the Wehrmacht, which included the Heer, Luftwaffe (Air Force), and Kriegsmarine (Navy) (the …[Read more]

and Moishe/Avrum being brothers…I love it so much XD

@keilah-h @esther-c @koshka

Anyone want a Matthias scene?

(also feat Charna, Moishe, and Avrum, lol)

Matthias followed Charna down the winding halls, his shoes echoing much louder than he once anticipated. The winding halls were dark, and dare he think it, even foreboding.

They seemed to stretch on endlessly, as if they were paths that led the…

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@esther-c @koshka @keilah-h

EEEEEEE

y’all have no idea how HAPPY it makes me that y’all like this new story idea!!! (esp bc Leon and Riker don’t wish to cooperate rn😭 but this idea won’t leave my head, so XD I’m actually currently writing a scene for it)

and y’all haven’t even met Avrum, Moishe (I am loving his personality already,…[Read more]

@theducktator

Good choice 😁

@theducktator

That death made me madder than possibly any other death/supposed death in the books. It was sweet though, that each of the kids got to feel their father’s love in their own special way.

Peet though. Peet hurt.