Jaybird

@smiley

Well….. I’m also an author, and there are only two kinds of authors: “those who are insane, and those who are good at hiding it”

Soooo….. I may have proved them right. XD

Honestly, being the oldest can be tough! I always, always wanted an older brother. I pick older brothers out of books to be my fictional older brothers and…[Read more]

@smiley

Hello! I’m Ellette!

I think I’ve seen a few of your things while stocking KP before I became a member.

I guess I’ll introduce myself.

I’m a homeschool Senior. I’m reformed Baptist/Covenantor

I’m the oldest in my family.

I write Novels and Short stories, (I do some songs and poems, but they are generally for my story) I write fiction…[Read more]

@hybridlore

btw, I’m surprised the protection squad isn’t out in full force yet.

I guess Koshka and Elishiavet are behind.

@hybridlore

Yes, I am interested in what he says. It may just be a girl thing to catch stuff like that and it might go right over his head.

@hybridlore

Okay, so I have a question. Would you have still called it if Amelia hadn’t brought up wanting a baby in the letter to Sabina?

Did you call it the whole time, or was there any point that you actually thought she was sick.

Should I cut out the baby part in the letter to make this scene more stressful, or no?

 

 

Oh boy… this is n…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Right. Ellette told me.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

 

12/28/24

Section 1.

 

(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉

if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.

 

NEXT SECTION

The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…

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@freed_and_redeemed

This is good! I like this scene!

Wait, hang on……. you got him stuck there and now you don’t know what to do?!?!

Haha…… I may or may not have done that to a character before………

 

Honestly, George doesn’t seem very stable at the moment, If Riker gets out of the room and George follows and trips over something…[Read more]

@liberty

Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*

I’m afraid not 😔

What @ellette-giselle said about him having several chances and accepting none of them is correct

@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else

 

Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅

 

a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]

ya’ll

 

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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

 

 

 

*Bwwwwwwwh* 🤧

 

 

 

Ya’ll,

 

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MY PET SNOWBALL RAN AWAY FROM HOME LAST NIGHT!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

 

*Bwwwwwwwh* 🤧

 

 

My precious snowball! Oh, how I loved that it. . .

I made sure it was nice and smooth, no rocks. I let it go outside and play. I even made it it’s own pair of jammies!

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S-sorry, I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

You’re very welcome.

Also, why does that racoon picture have an expression that so fits what I know of you? lolololol.

 

@linus-smallprint

 

I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

Thanks. It actually wasn’t in the first or second draft. I had a reference made to it in the third, but I thought I should flush it out into a full s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good!

I’ll see if I can get at least one of your new sections done today.

Wonderful!! Thanks! Looking forward to it!

@linus-smallprint

 

Also, what about Andrew Peterson’s Carry the Fire? We both agreed on that one.

Okay yeah, we did. That one is a great song.

 

Oh, looks like you mentioned the editor question. Ignore my second offer. I thought you might have missed it.Glad you found a good person for the job!

😉

 

 

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know how to send doc. links. so, here are my answers.

 

The Narrow Path Trilogy: Book One – The Cost Feedback Questions

 

Character

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Alan. Because he was the redemption character, and I LOVE redemption characters. If you look at my…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

My sister managed to get away with one-word answers for the questions I did for my first draft

lol. That sounds like my brother.

 

I’m on it. Give me one sec….

@liberty

 

one older brother

LUCKYYYYYYY!!!!! That’s why I like Phil so much. He’s my fictional older brother.

I’m the oldest with two younger brothers and a younger sister.

 

 

My friend actually had Summer of Suspense and lent it to me. I liked it so much I looked up the author to see if she wrote anything else, and then I discovered it was…[Read more]

@liberty

OH IT IS SO GOOD!

You must read it!

You won’t be able to put it down. It is stressful!!!

(Peder is my favorite character by the way.)

@liberty

No! I’ve never been to Highland games. That sounds AMAZING!

Have you?

 

My dad has the German. Our last name is actually German, and I look very German, though my brothers take after the highlander and irish side.